-King-
Feb 1 2007, 07:18 AM
QUOTE(Matt2 @ Jan 31 2007, 10:29 PM)  Your home page is a bit..... bland. It doesn't really have much on it and isn't worded very well. It doesn't really pull me in and say click on a link to go to another part of my site. Even though it doesn't look like your using the home page of your website, you should get a free template or something and put the links into that to tidy it up. In the free stuff section of the forums you should find some sites to get free templates from. The Yahoo! ads are also really annoying. Would there be any chance you could get the site hosted somewhere else - like Trap17 *hint* *hint*. I like the World of Warcraft sites, I think they look quite snazzy, you should design a flash thing like that for your homepage. The last site I couldn't read because I can't read the language that its in, but overall those sites look quite good. The things I think you should work on are: The Homepage and Maybe imbebbing the flash apps into an html page so that you don't see the .swf at the top of the screen, and so you can change the title bar. Other than that I like it  I cant make home page in FLASH dont know why, and I know that HOST geocities sucks,that is the way why i come here, becouse peoples sad that Trap17 is much better then geocities, soo i come here to get host, and The last one of my pages ( CRO Killers ) is on Croatia language that is why you can read it, it is site for my Croatian guild in some stupid game... Thanks
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sylenzednuke
Feb 1 2007, 11:07 AM
Here's what I have to say about your web-sites :- Site 1 - I guess it only leads to the second link so no use of saying anything though a little bit of graphics will make it look good, do something like tables or something.  Site 2 - Umm, the flash is pretty good, but I guess the background should be changed to something custom rather than just the official graphics. And yeah the forum is pretty good too, I mean the skin. Site 3 - Awesome, great job done to be honest, everything seems to be quite much in place but it would've been better if the colours inside matched the creature and the background. Site 4 - I don't understand the language so not much to say but the background is just AWESOME, really. I don't have much to say as it is the users above have already bombarded suggestions upon you! On another note, embed those flash files into a page, I know GeoCities sucks and I guess you're problems will be solved here at Trap 17, really man, this is the best host I've been to, so grab your credits fast and get the 2nd hosting plan, it will take 20 credits more but it is well worth it!
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-King-
Feb 1 2007, 08:13 PM
QUOTE(sylenzednuke @ Feb 1 2007, 12:07 PM) Here's what I have to say about your web-sites :- Site 1 - I guess it only leads to the second link so no use of saying anything though a little bit of graphics will make it look good, do something like tables or something. Site 2 - Umm, the flash is pretty good, but I guess the background should be changed to something custom rather than just the official graphics. And yeah the forum is pretty good too, I mean the skin. Site 3 - Awesome, great job done to be honest, everything seems to be quite much in place but it would've been better if the colours inside matched the creature and the background. Site 4 - I don't understand the language so not much to say but the background is just AWESOME, really. I don't have much to say as it is the users above have already bombarded suggestions upon you! On another note, embed those flash files into a page, I know GeoCities sucks and I guess you're problems will be solved here at Trap 17, really man, this is the best host I've been to, so grab your credits fast and get the 2nd hosting plan, it will take 20 credits more but it is well worth it! Thank you for suggestions, and i get 10 credits and for begin i take 1 package, but later i will take 2nd package with 30 more credits.... And for now i can just say that i'm building new web site about World Of Warcraft if i want to know... But i have one question... Does anyone here is realy good with painting? Becouse i need few pictures... If someone know work that please tell me.... 
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MarkyMark
Feb 1 2007, 09:25 PM
My 2 cents...too much flash for no reason..too many stolen images...
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-King-
Feb 2 2007, 08:57 PM
Yeah i know that i stole images, but i need someone who will paint for me, becouse i dont know good paint, soo someone need to make own pictures for me....
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Yacoby
Feb 2 2007, 11:28 PM
Site one is very bland, and needs some work. At least get a template from somewhere like OSWD (Google it). If you want to make one of your flash pages into your home page, you need to embed the flash file into your htm document. You can find information on this by typing in Google: "Embed Flash" One thing that annoyed me about site 3 was that when I clicked on "Gallery" it had a lot of moving lines, and took a long time to get to the content. I suggest you try and speed up those animations. Site two and four could in my opinion be done significantly better in HTML and CSS as there doesn't seem to be any need to use flash for those sites other than the fade effects. Overall site three was by far the best.
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bk2070
Feb 2 2007, 11:37 PM
I signed your guestbook and showed how I can help your site a little bit. For example, switching to Trap17 would give you no ads and things like forums and such that are listed in Fantastico! Geocities is a good starter, but you need to take the next step! So thats my suggestion
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dundun2007
Feb 3 2007, 02:27 AM
Well the first one was really plain and it basically just served as a redirect to the other site. The world of warcraft ones do look pretty good, you can tell that it was a premade template though, but still. The last one didnt work for me at all so i cant really comment on that one. Although overall between the 2 world of warcraft ones good job, they are looking good keep up the good work.
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-King-
Feb 3 2007, 09:19 AM
Thanks to you all, i take Geocities for start, but now i come here to take better free host, and step 3 will be my own Domain, but i dont know when i will get step 3... World Of Warcraft 1 is in build ( it was ) but now i erase that site from my computer and start building new better site World Of Warcraft 1, but WoW 2 site is good ( the best ) and it have too much some stupid errors, soo i most build new site... I need some explanation for Flash, becouse there you can build what ever you want... I like Flash, and i will try all the time to Improve my sites...
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AutumnDesigns
Feb 5 2007, 05:26 AM
Not bad at all. The two WoW sites that are done in Flash are pretty cool. You DO need to choose your font carefully though. I noticed on the second WoW page, your font wasn't a very good choice. Also, becareful about clashing colors. It's the small things that steer people away from websites. I'm not too good with Flash, I can't do sites in flash yet. Yours are coming along nicely. Good work.
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