I looked your templates, first of all it's very positive that you are creative and that you made something what is the product of your imagination and knowledge.. I like the most your last template that you made, but maybe you should make some template with colors, which are not so "cold".. some colors which calm,and make some good atmosphere..

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Xenon Hack: First thing that cought my eye is: Font is too big, make it smaller (menu and main content)

Simple red layout: Colors are to strong (I'm blind by now ) I suggest you try some gradient fill and as one poster suggested: look at your site for some time, and see if its to "hot"

Mario Circuit Layout: Colors dont go together well (green and red, hm?) and again I had to close it quickly to keep my eyes healthy

Complete Sony Layout: I like this one. I lacks some details but it look nice. Just make pictures less blury (use gifs for everything, except for images-photos). Save at quality of 12 if you are using Photoshop!

Revolution Layout: Too empty. Try changing the lines (<hr>) into dotted lines like the line above the header on this page www.hdz.hr

Keep practicing!

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Xenon Hack:
5/10
Basic, but not bad. The header graphic is very neet ant tidy but the rest of the template/design is a bit boring.

Simple Red:
2/10
Horrible. The header is hard to see and tacky. The red background isa bit too bright and boring. and the rest of the site is just boring. . . sorry

Mario Cart:
4/10
Not bad design. The use of the mario cart renders is quite effective and i like the font used alot. But otherwise, the site layout/design is borign again.

Sony:
7/10
By far the best design. The header graphic is ok and the text postioning is a ncie effect. (the only thing i can say is that it looks like SONVACCESS as the tail on the Y in sony is hacked off) The rounded borders are nice too.

Revolution:
2/10
mmmmm very plain

i know ur new to this all so don't take my words too heart. I review everyone with the same attitude. BUT i can see your improving, sicne your first designs/attempts. The sony one you made is quite good and pleasing to the eye. So well done for your attempts. i'm sure as you get more confident in Photoshop (or what ever you used) you will create better templates.

 

 

 

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thanks for the comments everyone i haven't made a good template in a while the majority of the ones i make are simplistic but i'm going to be adding them to my site for free to download

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