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Small Love Poem - Does it suck or does it not?

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Small Love Poem - Does it suck or does it not?

harrison858
Nov 19 2008, 11:41 PM
This is a small love poem simply called Love. Rate it please, 1-10, and if it sucks, let me know smile.gif

WARNING: It will probably suck. Read at your own risk. I am not responsible for your medical bills regarding blindness. biggrin.gif


I shall forever remember
By harrison858
November 18th, 2008


I shall forever remember,
The day our eyes met.
That day in late November
You too can recall, I bet.

That day in November,
When I gazed upon you.
I will always remember
When love was still new.

 

 

 


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hertonsils
Nov 24 2008, 11:45 AM
Hahahaha it's mushy as hell but it's nice smile.gif

I'll give it a 6, sounds like you've really got someone special there wink.gif

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erk
Dec 2 2008, 05:58 PM
aww, that made me smile ;]

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cangor
Dec 4 2008, 05:59 AM
that was short and sweet. if someone wrote it for me I'd be touched. laugh.gif
Not the most artistic though, maybe a 7. biggrin.gif

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laniczech
Dec 4 2008, 06:42 AM
impressive, i do feel it seems a rough draft, ill give it a 5, with a little patience it will be a 10

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