kobra500
Mar 9 2008, 04:21 AM
| | CLICK HERE Here is my short story I had to write for school. Read it review it say what you think. It's written in english uk so it may affect you but i doubt it.
I wish i could paste the whole thing in... it is mine lol but I can't which is a shame anyway enjoy
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Inhuman
Mar 9 2008, 07:35 AM
QUOTE We're sorry, but the document you requested couldn't be found or has been deleted at the author's request. Either you posted a bad URL or you took it down before we could see it. Ya might want to fix that.
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kobra500
Mar 10 2008, 05:44 PM
It works fine for me?
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demonlord
Mar 10 2008, 07:06 PM
yeah it's not there, could you fix that, i would like to read it
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OpaQue
Mar 10 2008, 08:22 PM
It says, QUOTE Oops
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