PlugComputers

Oct 25 2006, 02:00 AM

Haha a free computer eh? Well I don't know what I could do about that. How about one like I have listed in the Portfolio page? I bet anyone would go for one of those, very unique.

But anyways, thanks for the suggestion. A brighter, silver color would probably be nice for those who have "seeing issues" as I like to put it. Haha you're not old, just moer seasoned than some of us...

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the_aggie10

Oct 25 2006, 02:15 AM

its worth that...nice price....but im afraid im out of quarters...but i will have it no later than 2 years! still be around then ? ...not joking
i will work for it

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darran

Nov 26 2006, 08:48 AM

QUOTE(michaelper22 @ Nov 26 2006, 07:44 AM)

I should have mentioned that the site is very responsive. The simplistic design helps keep it loading quickly, which is a very important factor. From Google Hacks:

I don't think 3 images of 5 kb each would take up much request time, it may even differ by a few milli seconds, so there isn't a problem with adding images affecting your response time.

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michaelper22

Nov 25 2006, 11:44 PM

QUOTE(darran @ Nov 24 2006, 11:10 PM)

Last but not least, the biggest flaw in the entire site, too dull! The only image you have is at the banner, try inserting some images within each news item, it does help to lighten the site if there are some pleasing aesthetics in the site, perhaps maybe some animation, something to demonstrate what you are trying to say to your potential customers. Some colorful images would be great because total black is not my idea of a good invitation to potential customers.

I should have mentioned that the site is very responsive. The simplistic design helps keep it loading quickly, which is a very important factor. From Google Hacks:

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Speed isn't everything, it's almost the only thing. Your site should respond almost instantly to a request.

I think we all agree on that one.

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FLaKes

Nov 25 2006, 07:29 AM

The computers and the website look cool, although I think it need more images or something to make it more attractive. I clicked on the link and checked out your webpage and all I saw was mostly text.

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darran

Nov 25 2006, 04:10 AM

These are my comments

Banner: I think the banner is looking fine, with the exception of the following text 'Custom AMD and Intel Gaming, Built to Order Machines'. It is overlapping the cube which in my opinion spoils the entire banner. You could either shift the cube more to the right to give space to the text, or align your text in another position. Whichever works for you!

Menubar: I love the roll over image, when I highlight the menu buttons. But 1 thing bugs me though, and there is the amount of vertical space from the text to the end of the button. It puzzles me as to why would you put the text to the top and not in the centre of the button. I feel it would look better if it was centralised in the middle of the button.

Last but not least, the biggest flaw in the entire site, too dull! The only image you have is at the banner, try inserting some images within each news item, it does help to lighten the site if there are some pleasing aesthetics in the site, perhaps maybe some animation, something to demonstrate what you are trying to say to your potential customers. Some colorful images would be great because total black is not my idea of a good invitation to potential customers.

The bad side apart, this site looks very clean, especially the way the news items are seperated with a different style; I like that. And the fact that your site is minimised for old sizes such as 800 * 600 means that your site caters to even the smallest of resolutions in today's world. Work on the graphics site, and I am sure this site would be perfect

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rsf

Nov 24 2006, 10:31 PM

I think the logo you were talking about would sound better as "Explain your desires and let us create them" or something like that.

I like the layout a lot and the site looks very professional. Only thing is the text in the banner overlaps the logo in one part, the words are too high up on the buttons so they look unnatural, and under the portfolio page you spelt "don't" as "dont't" in the first paragraph.

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