techiejohn

Nov 9 2005, 03:05 AM

QUOTE(ciroxyz @ Nov 8 2005, 06:30 PM)

There are still links missing (and about page) but other content is present, so tell me what do you think?

Here it is:
http://www.ciroxyz.trap17.com/avijacija

I would rate it at.....6 out of 10!

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hulunes

Nov 9 2005, 04:54 AM

well,it is very nice and clear from looks.it is full of news or history of aircraft...so pity that i could not read that your site has passed the w3c,which is a awesome standard page.
overall,pretty good site.

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Unregistered 015

Nov 9 2005, 10:52 AM

QUOTE(Spectre @ Nov 9 2005, 01:46 AM)

I would just like to point out the TOS:
The design itself isn't bad, but you better translate it to English. It doesn't appear to contain anything illegal, but as I don't speak the language it's in, I don't know - and neither would most of the Trap17 staff.

Yea, I know that the language should be english. But this is not my "official" trap17 site. It's located at http://ciroxyz.trap17.com/avijacija (notice /avijacija) and it was made for purpose of testing W3C validation service and for fun. My official site at http://ciroxyz.trap17.com will be in english and those other sites (avijacija and http://ciroxyz.trap17.com/SDA) will have another (paid) hosting.
Anyway, sorry for violating the TOS.

 

 

 

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Avalon

Nov 9 2005, 12:41 PM

The site has a nice clean look to it, looks professional, like a business site. The sections appear well laid out and informative, even if I can't read the language. Navigation is simple and clear, even if I can't read the language.

Here's my suggestions for improvement

The Piper Warrior III picture used for the background image is pretty much a waste unless you are going to repeat the image. With just the 1 image it is often covered by other graphics and therefore pointless.

The History section has too much text on one page for my liking. With a large amount of text, visitors might tire of reading and therefore your message will be lost. It might be better to break the history up into sections, perhaps make sections that cover a range of years so you have multiple pages to the section but with less text on each page rather than 1 large block of text.

In the gallery it would have been nice to see captions under the images that tell you what plane it is and how big the image is.

On the Fizika page, (not sure what that means, it looks like a description of how aeroplanes work), some of the images have English text and some don't. Use of a uniform language would be better if possible, even if you have to change the text on the images yourself. Looking at those images, I think it would been better if you cleaned up the text on them, some of it is very hard to read.

Load speed of the pages was quite good for me, even if I am on a dial-up connection. Perhaps the Internet was a bit congested when others were looking or you have changed things since they made their comments.

Overall, I'd say a nicely laid out site that appears to be very informative, well done. 8/10

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sxyloverboy

Nov 9 2005, 01:14 PM

i really like the site design that you got going. the banner really fits in nicely with the colors that you used in the site. good job looking out for that.

One thing that i would try to change/work on is to either get that light blue inner border away from the place where all the text is or have it the background color also for where the text and make the text a bit darker. in fizka.html is think it might be good to use captions for your images. i dont know your posibilites for doing that but i would like it as a person looking at the webpage. (if i understood the language. )

the last thing i can say is that the small text in the logo under Avi Jaci Ja is a bit hard to read. i know it would be hard to change that because you woult have to change the whole website color a bit. but i just wanted you to know.

i hope this has also helped you a bit and that i have said some stuff that other people havent.

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michaelper22

Mar 14 2006, 02:28 AM

QUOTE(jlhaslip @ Nov 8 2005, 11:38 PM)

I like it. Nice and clean layout. Light colours. Easy to navigate in (wish I knew the language). 8.5/10 if you want a number. Took a while to load. Can you lessen the 'weight' of the pages at all? Possibly reduce the image size and density?

The CMS used to make the site was Joomla!.
I like the site to. That template is really nice, but I like full width one templates more. You should also write some content for the site (I looked at it and I only see the Joomla sample items.
Overall rating: 5/10

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Chez

Jan 23 2006, 11:28 AM

long load time, at least longer than I'd like. I absolutely love it! It's simplicity belies it's content. The banner is unique and I like the stats pages on each plane. looks professional 8/10

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apollo

Jan 23 2006, 11:12 AM

Page is Ok. It looks like aircraft company page:) That`s good. That`s serius page. And again, border is bit too wide...

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Sympatico

Jan 2 2006, 04:21 PM

I like the site very much , nice and clean , my style . I m hoping to make something similiar like that .

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wangs

Dec 21 2005, 10:53 AM

the history of human's fly dream
i will save the pictures.
the speed is wide enough for free,

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