Despite The despite I see Reminds me Of the days when I was once like you
Always doubting things Not wanting what tomorrow brings Doing almost anything I wanted to.
Sure it may not be a big deal now But over time you'll find That all the mistakes you've made somehow Will never leave your mind.
Follow your heart but make sure you do what's right, This day could be the start to a better life Try not to make all the mistakes I've made I'm sure a few won't hurt But remember all the advice I gave Please bury this in your heart.
Well, it's good, but you made the poem to rhyme. Sometimes, you should find words that fit better and they don't have to rhyme all the time. Of course, rhymimg would be better, but words that fit would be better than rhyming.
Replying to BordaForx First off all that is what poems are is rhyming they don't always have to have words that fit together if that is what poems are then we might as well just wright a story wrather than poetry and it iis not even funny hwta you wrote about why would you even right about your sister becasue some peole lov their sisters so why did you even put that haha after what you said...
Well, it's good, but you made the poem to rhyme. Sometimes, you should find words that fit better and they don't have to rhyme all the time. Of course, rhymimg would be better, but words that fit would be better than rhyming.
PS: Why would you write about your sister? Haha.
yeah he has a point. you don't need to make everything rhyme. all poems don't have to rhyme. and it only sounds good if the rhyming is good. if it is cheap crappy rhyming it sounds horrible. good job though. keep up the good work.
