wassie
Nov 1 2005, 07:07 AM
| | this is just a short poem i made last night:
Where does love exually park?
as for some of us its light,
and for others its dark.
Love, for everyone different to see,
as we adapt, to what we want love to be.
Some want it fast,
others slow.
Maybe love needs time to grow.
Sometimes we even end up quick,
as we see your love spiral down, like a burning stick.
Thinking when will i find 'That One',
remembering you thought you found it, when you just past love begon.
As the myth of the 'One Love' grows old,
It is in our hearths where its only beginning to unfold.
so did you like it? |
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dvalkass
Nov 1 2005, 07:37 AM
That's a very nice poem, well done on making it. How long did it take?
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wassie
Nov 1 2005, 09:56 AM
4 minutes 
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floresid
Nov 1 2005, 10:19 AM
Pretty cool, good job.
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jlhaslip
Nov 1 2005, 04:55 PM
wassie
Nov 2 2005, 10:07 PM
lol... i'm not english, my grammar isn't perfect 
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boy-thoj
Oct 17 2007, 04:59 AM
I like it. And it does touch a good point on how everyone just see love differently. I mean, just your poem say some want it slow and some want it fast. I wonder if for you, you want it slow or fast. To me, slow but not too slow. Normal? Maybe ahahh.
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deadlyweapon
Oct 18 2007, 03:01 PM
sounds awesome. cant believe it didnt take longer.good job.
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mc05w37
Oct 19 2007, 06:07 PM
that's too straight.. btw, it's nice
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Hirishiolo
Dec 28 2007, 06:15 PM
very nice!good job!
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