Fun4TheMoney

Mar 12 2005, 08:56 PM

Fun 4 The Money All feedback welcome. I want to start promoting this site and selling ads, but I want to make sure it's ready, first, so you folks get to be my dress rehearsal. If you think I need more content, first, I'll hold off. If you see anything else that needs improvement, post here or send me an email. I'LL TAKE ALL THE HELP I CAN GET. Thanks. Suz

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bs_varun

Mar 13 2005, 01:28 AM

QUOTE(Fun4TheMoney @ Mar 13 2005, 07:56 AM)

Fun 4 The Money

Cool Website? I want to know how you got google Search engine for your website

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Furor

Mar 13 2005, 05:51 AM

To make your website much more attractive, you should consider the use of CSS (Cascading Style Sheet). The content of your website is really nice. You should try to atleast add a border to your buttons so that it doesn't seem out of place. And lastly, you should change the default "Times New Roman" font to something else. I'd say you've done a very decent job with the site and guessing by the content, I think it's gonna be popular in no time.

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Sprnknwn

Mar 13 2005, 01:40 PM

I would make a more attractive banner... fewer buttons or at least less dispersed. I´d try to make something with tables also... better without borders and the cells on the right and or the left slightly coloured...

Also, notice that the cell in which tha main banner is has white bakground... and the banner´s background is pale blue. Try putting in cell´s bg that blue.

And for all, like someone said, try CSS... your website will look much better.

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Fun4TheMoney

Mar 13 2005, 03:33 PM

QUOTE(bs_varun @ Mar 12 2005, 06:28 PM)

I have Google Adsense. I guess it's an option, cuz I didn't have to jump through hoops for it. I just wandered over there and picked it up.

Suz

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owbussey

Oct 18 2006, 11:44 PM

The layout is nice and organized. You might want to add some more pictures. Maybe something in the middle of the sky picture. Maybe a kite? The lniks all work so that is good. Some of the websites I go to are all out of date. The links have good content too. Each link has main links and related topic links. Overall I think it is very organized. I think you just need to spice it up a little with one or 2 more pictures.

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Fun4TheMoney

Mar 26 2005, 01:32 AM

Okay, I’m ready for a 2nd try.

First, let me thank everyone who thought it was fine the way it was. I thought so, too. LOL! But when I started reading what the others had to say, I had to agree with them, too.

“I think that your color selection is average and that those blue buttons don’t really go with the white background. Your web site definitely needs more style!!! So try to make it more stylish!!!”

Okay, I got rid of the blue buttons.

“Maybe when you become big, u can add a better css(which i could make).... “

I struggled with CSS for a day or two and decided it would have to wait until I can give it my full attention. I do agree that it needs it, however.

“To make your website much more attractive, you should consider the use of CSS (Cascading Style Sheet).”

Thank you for this. I didn’t have a clue what CSS meant when I posted this topic.

“And lastly, you should change the default "Times New Roman" font to something else.”

Oops! I missed this. I’ll change it next time around.

“Your websute has far to much buttons in my taste.”

You’re right. I got rid of almost half of them.

“Also, notice that the cell in which tha main banner is has white bakground... and the banner´s background is pale blue.” . . . better without borders “

I never saw that blue background. The backgrounds were all supposed to be white. My monitor isn’t working right, so they looked white to me. All fixed now. Thanks. (I also got rid of the table borders.)

“I think you should add some style to the page, you need some layout, some thought about the colour scheme. There's no structure there, there is navigation and "content" all over the page. I'm sorry, but I don't think you page is ready.”

I agree, but I am also uninspired right now. Well, not exactly uninspired, but my creative juices are flowing in the writing and marketing areas—not in design. I tried to make some improvements. Hopefully I succeeded enough to move on for now. <fingers crossed.>

Okay, please check again and let me know if this design will fly, temporarily. Only the first page has the new design. I didn’t want to copy it to all the other pages if it still isn’t ready.

Fun4TheMoney

We’re having company for the weekend, so I may not get back here until Sunday afternoon. Then I'll check your responses and get back to work. Thanks in advance for giving my page another look.
Suz

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Goosestaf

Mar 15 2005, 02:49 PM

I'm not to keen on it, but thats because i like more graphiclly inteseive site designs.
But ya coding, features and content are all solid
Nice job

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