Nani Cheri

Aug 23 2006, 06:21 PM

Hi! I have made a new website... Its still in Dutch, and I have hosted it thru geocities temporary, because fisrt I have to upgrade my credits...and err well, that can take a while LOL But ehh let me know what you think, ofcourse you wouldnt understand the content of it, but maybe some feedback about the template I made with fireworks, flash and dreamweaver? thanks My Website

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TypoMage

Aug 23 2006, 10:31 PM

Your site looks great unfortunetly I cannot read Dutch. So I really do not know what it is about but the layout it awsome! So keep it up and put a translation on it!

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bhavesh

Aug 24 2006, 07:06 PM

Your site's Template is cool
But again language barrier every word in the site was alien to me, whenever you make the english version dont forget to give the update here.
You have still not implemented the suggestion mentioned above.
What are you doing , come on, be quick.

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Dawiss

Aug 26 2006, 03:56 PM

I think the website is too bright and way too simple.. I would add some darker things to it so it dont look like white paper with few a bit darker places.. The verdena font is ok.. maybe you need to make the website smaller because I looked thrue it and there isnt lots of information.. and the animation is ok ..

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Nani Cheri

Aug 27 2006, 12:07 PM

QUOTE(bhavesh @ Aug 24 2006, 09:06 PM)

Your site's Template is cool
But again language barrier every word in the site was alien to me, whenever you make the english version dont forget to give the update here.
You have still not implemented the suggestion mentioned above.
What are you doing , come on, be quick.

Whaahahah well okay than Bhavesh I've changed the title, guess I forgot the most important things, but thats why I ask second opinons here so you guys can tell me what I have overlooked. I made an english version and it is done

Panzer: Thanks for the tip about translating it in Google, but I translated my self already, I saw your reply post too late!

Many of you think it's a bit to plain, but I made this template in 2 days and for me that is a very short time actually hahaha, I actually didn't spend much time in it because it had to be done fast. I thought it was to plain too but I was afraid I would mess it up, and besides it doesn't disturb me really. The content is the important thing actually. I want them to concentrate on the content . But if someone has some suggestions for making it less plain, ofcourse you can share it with me

I have been very busy, and I have to post more because right now my account is suspended, so untill I have enough credits, and if my account is unsespended I will remove it from Geocities and put it under Trap 17, duhhhhh hahahha


So take a look again at my website

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