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My New Song - Feedback please !!!

confessionalchrissite
Jul 26 2006, 09:24 PM
I like the structure and how you used your words... smile.gif

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Teri Luketic
Jul 26 2006, 10:46 PM
I thought the words were pretty cool fella.

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Loyalty without praise is better than with.


I especially like that part there! How true it is, or at least how it should be.

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zerogravity
Aug 13 2006, 09:46 AM
wow!brilliant!inspirational!amazing! really loved it!yo! i'm into writing rap too.i've just started though.
hoe do you write rap like that? i reaally want to know.

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