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New Song... - not quite sure if words are correct

sonorama
hehehe, im not quite sure the song is gramatically well written;

++ CAKE IT ++

i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care, if she dont care (x2)

my mummie told me she's the one
but im only the hald of one
you know im calling all this time
but you can't even take the phone

i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care, if she dont care (x2)

and i relaize that you've been watched
by a boy whose parents are
the wealthy of the paramount
he wants to show you that he's cool

and i all i want to do
is take a piece or two...

CAKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care, if she dont care (x4)


Hopefully you guys like it, it is for my band EVANSS

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badinfluence
hey, you got the song smile.gif but your site link isnt working. do you have a sample audio record?? if we can listen, it would be better.. smile.gif keep writing..

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90soft
lalalallaal
it would be the lala song

(im posting because i want credits:p)

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sonorama
QUOTE(badinfluence @ May 25 2005, 02:21 PM)
hey, you got the song smile.gif but your site link isnt working. do you have a sample audio record?? if we can listen, it would be better.. smile.gif keep writing..
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sorry, the correct link is www.evanss.org

and yeah, we have a couple of recorded songs already, look at the site for further details. Thanks for ur comment , i will look at ur website now biggrin.gif

 

 

 


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ffuniverse
Yeah it good

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ejohn
i can see why you were apprehensive of the grammar in your song. forget that and we have a pretty cool song ;-) just downloaded it. lets be frank, its OK. but i think you would be going
QUOTE
i dont care,
i dont care,
i dont care,

right now

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badinfluence
QUOTE(sonorama @ May 27 2005, 05:12 PM)
sorry, the correct link is www.evanss.org

and yeah, we have a couple of recorded songs already, look at the site for further details. Thanks for ur comment , i will look at ur website now biggrin.gif
*



wow, you guys are rock! i went through ur site. but i cant read all those mean!! laugh.gif what language is that anyway?
i like the rocking drum of your band, especially and all three demo songs are nice..how many pieces of ur band?

hit me after finished recording of the above song.. agian write more!!

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mahesh2k
TYeah that sounds really good love it.
man love it.
keep those ruucoming.
Love it .hands up.
hmm u are kind creative.

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