Phyre
Jun 15 2005, 12:12 AM
| | A new sig I just created with a few new brushes I've found. It's my first attempt at a sig with an extruding render. The render is from an Anime movie called Appleseed [http://appleseedthemovie.com] and the I created the render myself by extracting it from a high resolution screenshot, so it's a bit rough around the edges. Tell me what you think, and how I can improve it. And yes, I know the "phyre" text sucks..and the "Appleseed" is the official logo/title/font thing of the movie.
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Johnny
Jun 15 2005, 01:42 AM
Looks pretty nice, the only things I could point out is the font for Phyre, like you said, and fixing the render up a bit. Otherwise, looks pretty nice to me. Oh, if his right shoulder stuck out it might look a little better as well...maybe. Good sig though. 8/10 on what you have now. (That's kinda funny, because at lunch today a friend was talking about Appleseed, it's funny that just after I heard about it I'd see a sig for it.  )
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Phyre
Jun 15 2005, 02:00 AM
Actually, the right shoulder was cut off on the original screenshot  so I had to work with what I could. Any further suggestions for the "phyre" text? And I highly reccomend Appleseed, whether or not you like anime. It rocks!
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Johnny
Jun 15 2005, 02:25 AM
QUOTE(Phyre @ Jun 14 2005, 07:00 PM) Actually, the right shoulder was cut off on the original screenshot  so I had to work with what I could. Any further suggestions for the "phyre" text? And I highly reccomend Appleseed, whether or not you like anime. It rocks! Ah. I see. And try the font Stuntman. I dunno if it'll look good, but it's worth a try. And I LOVE anime.
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leiaah
Jun 15 2005, 06:34 AM
I'm not a fan of anime (probably because it's my brother's favorite  ) but I like it! P.S. I sort of got jealous with all of you out there who show off your sigs so here's my first signature creation (this should probably be in another post but...  ) Do you see it? The render is from an Alias website and the brushes from deviantart.com. So? ...
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Cool_Freaker
Jun 15 2005, 07:11 AM
Phyre, looking good. I don't think the render is cut out that bad, I think it looks fine, unless you look really hard, trying to spot out of place pixels  Just when you change the font for Phyre, maybe move it down a bit more and a little more to the left. Loving that background though. leiaah, it's pretty decent for a first sig. Next time, try a border, bring out the text more, and try not to make it too monotone  - awesome start though
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Johnny
Jun 15 2005, 07:30 AM
QUOTE(leiaah @ Jun 14 2005, 11:34 PM) I'm not a fan of anime (probably because it's my brother's favorite  ) but I like it! P.S. I sort of got jealous with all of you out there who show off your sigs so here's my first signature creation (this should probably be in another post but...  ) Do you see it? The render is from an Alias website and the brushes from deviantart.com. So? ...  @leiaah -- yupyup. Like CF said, needs a few minor touches here and there, but overall, awesome start.
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Phyre
Jun 15 2005, 08:21 PM
Leiaah - A lot better then my first attempt....my suggestions are to blend in the renders a bit more, and have a little contrast between the text and the background...it's really hard to read. My sig - Yeah...i know theres some loose pixels laying around...I'll clean it up soon and fix a few things....this is the 2nd render i've ever done, so it's not exactly perfect. This is the first sig I've made that isn't blue, green, black or grey o_O.
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Saint_Michael
Jun 15 2005, 09:06 PM
get rid of the light blue background then its more pop uppish
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Ralphie
Jun 16 2005, 01:53 AM
usually i really dont like the popup sigs. that is because they almost always do not look smooth around the edges. but yours actually does look pretty smooth. i also like the background of the sig. the blue/purple color fits well with the render. nice job.
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Johnny
Jun 17 2005, 01:18 AM
QUOTE(Phyre @ Jun 16 2005, 04:07 PM) I think it may be your comp....All I see is dark blues and purples o_O Same here. O.o
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Phyre
Jun 16 2005, 11:07 PM
I think it may be your comp....All I see is dark blues and purples o_O
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Saint_Michael
Jun 16 2005, 09:40 AM
im seeing a light blue background on your pop up phyre maybe its my computer but i see it
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Johnny
Jun 16 2005, 06:42 AM
QUOTE(Phyre @ Jun 15 2005, 09:21 PM) @ Saint_Michael : Are you talking to me or leiaah? o_O Hers isn't a popup, and yours doesn't have light blue...I'm confused.
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