serverph

Jan 2 2007, 05:02 PM

there seems to be nothing much there yet... as i understand from the homepage that it is still under development.

in any case, at it's early stages, i have observed some minor things which may need improvement:
a: spelling -- for your site to have a more professional personality to it, double-check on spellings. on your homepage, i believe Amatures is supposed to be Amateurs.
b: grammar -- relative to spelling and projecting a professional site is grammar. "...will be availabe for the public with a few weeks" would be better with slight corrections, namely available and within. i understand that english is not likely your native language, and a little editing help from someone familiar with the language is worth a try. or maybe run your text in MSWord to get a visual prompt of what needs corrections.
c: redundant page contents -- as of this time, privacy.html and terms_of_use.html bear the same content. as they are separate page links, i see your intention is to have separate content for each. maybe just put "Content under development" for the page which is still pending instead of having your site users see the same content on both. or you can decide later on to merge these two together later on as one page, and just modify your links on your site.
d: design -- design-wise, left and right margins seem to be too wide, as compared to the top and bottom margins. unless of course if you intend to add additional content on the left and right margins later on, which would compensate for page balance.

keep us informed on future updates. and good luck with your site.

 

 

 

Reply

MIGUE2k7

Jan 2 2007, 08:37 PM

The Desing of your site seems pretty good, the colors fit well, in really, i dont got so much to comment about cause your site hasnt so much content right now.
I liked your slogan

Reply

Saint_Michael

Jan 3 2007, 06:47 AM

Although it's just me but your banner needs a border to it, way to blended into the background color. Or use an image that expands the width of the page (don't have a an example to show you) thats behind your header. Like the Contruction image might have to stealbarrow it sometime .

If you going for the Professional IT website, then you would have to start with these and build from there.

Computers
-Software
-Hardware
-Networking
-Security
-AI
-Viruses

Reply

serverph

Jan 3 2007, 06:43 PM

ei, delivi! double-check on your links also... there are some links which are apparently "broken" or were not properly linked to. i'll leave that for you to find out heheheü as there are just a few pages you have there for now.

Reply

Latest Entries

Got an Opinion! Express your Views! (no registration):-
Add your Reply/ Opinion/ Views/ Comments/ Suggestion/ Questions/ Queries etc.
Posts with decent grammar & English will be accepted and please refrain from profanities.
For asking a Question, We recommend you to sign-up (for free) so that you can track the topic easily.

Nature of your Post*:		Opinion/ Reply/ Comments Question/Query Feedback to us.
Name			Email
Title/Question*
(Maximum characters: 10,000) You have characters left.
Confirm Code:

1. Xatre.info - My New Website Design. - By delivi (7)
2. Dn Games! - Also: SpellBinder demo info (0)

   My website - www.dngames.trap17.com I've changed the layout (A while back, but meh) from the
   old chunky one (I doubt anyone rememers it though /tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle"
   emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif" />) and I was wondering what you all think. There'll
   hopefully be a demo of SpellBinder by the new year. It'll include all the things mentioned
   (Mining, smithing, fishing, cooking, crafting), weather, day/night system, months (which also affect
   the weather) a town (including being able to go in the houses) and randomized people, bu...

3. My New Website - www.laschatz.co.nr (6)

   I've setup a new website in my trap17 hosting account. la Schatz Please kindly
   view it and give me feedbacks on it. This site is base on the template developed by Andreas.
   I've made some modificationsa nd added some new features to it. still some of the sections are
   yet to be added, you can find contents in Exclusive Section and the links in right nav bar are
   active. Please try them and give your valuable advice how I can improve my site more....

4. Rate My Site's *design* (iambored.info) - yep, i created another one (16)

   So I created another website. Hopefully this one will be rated a little more highly than my last
   one. (Very few rated me above 5 /laugh.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle'
   alt='laugh.gif' /> ) Here it is. Please rate its design and not what the site has in it (its
   content). http://iambored.info/?skinpreview=rock ** PLEASE DO NOT RATE THE CONTENT OF THE SITE
   ** ...

5. The Catalyst Online - thecatalystph.info (3)

   I want to know what you guys can say about the latest lay-out of our university organ's website.
   this is like version 2, the first lay-out/design could be seen at the archives section. The Flash
   animation at the splash page loads so slow, I made it using Adobe Imageready CS. I don't have my
   Macromedia Studio 8 yet. SOme of the articles and messages at the Shoutbox are in Filipino, our
   language, but Admin OpaQue had allowed me to use our language as long as the site is not 100 percent
   in local....

6. StarCircleQuest.info - scq.serverph.uni.cc (18)

   I finally migrated my site to trap17. /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle'
   alt='smile.gif' /> and all kinks ironed out (i think /tongue.gif' border='0'
   style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tongue.gif' /> ) Please take a look at my site. And post reviews
   and ratings here (10=highest, 1=lowest) if you can. /smile.gif' border='0'
   style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /> If you encounter any glitch i need to work on my
   site, pls add here also so i can work on it. /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle'
   alt='smile.gif' /> thanks...

7. Finntroll.info - my fansite (8)

   Hey. I have another DJC Design project that is ready for some feedback/constructive criticism for
   this site which is hosted here at Trap17. It is www.finntroll.info , a fansite I made for Finnish
   Viking/Folk Metallers, Finntroll. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, also a rating out of
   10. Thanks....