Just tried to combine a right sentence in Egypt Hieroglyphs, but I don't know if I'm on the right way. I'm using the Jim Loy's diary(http://www.jimloy.com/egypt/egypt.htm), he also have explained how to build a simple sentence, it should be in that order: "verb subject object adverb". I'm on the try to make something like "When you learn, your live is joyful".
I have reordered it like:
1 sentence?(verb subject object adverb) | 2 sentence?(verb subject object adverb)
learn you - - is your live joyful
Here is what I came to:

But I'm absolutely sure that I'm in a big mistake
Thanks in advance

