Hip-hop Rhymes - Hip-Hop rhymes

hi i've been writing rhymes for about 6 months now is this is a little piece from my library...any good??


You hate me because I speak my mind

Forceful hatred

You will find in due time

The convenient crap you create

To cause my demise

I deflect swiftly as I maintain my rise

Through the ranks covering all flanks,

Yet no need for cavalry

I'm a solo soldier and I live lavishly

Yet in the bunker of this battle, overhead hear lyrical gun shots rattle

Try to diminish me if you can, arrogant man

But I'm like an un-noticed tumour

Or a lethal rumour

I grow and multiply in quick succession

I'll be the catalyst for your recession

This world is my book, quick see look

I'm the super hero I will be victorious, the glorious

Things I do

I'll save you from yourself

You live in a false pretence a farce

A world that's totally different from ours

Because on this earth

The world revolves around me, I'm like the sun

I'm the cause of gravity

Rumours and adversary's dissolve around thee,

Like I was concentrated acid

You're swimming in my lake, lake placid

My presence

Strikes sheer resemblance of a giant

My words hit hard like Barry bonds, leave a mental scar

Shrapnel in the heart

Bullet to the chest

Piercing internal organs

Sheering through the rest

As you try to impress

Fabricate stories to interest

In reality are you an illusion or real

I'm like a magician's critic as I reveal

You looking like a fraud very definitely

Loosing yourself in the midst of popularity

Open your eyes try and seek clarity

Let the psychological mist fade

Because once you peak u will drop

Like a balloon you inflate so much you pop

What do you aim to achieve

Do you really believe you perceive

Yourself as a legend

This story of you is purely a myth

You deceive and lie and cheat

You're only out to reap

The benefits

For yourself the cards that are dealt

Change

They won't be a constant flush

When you decline, in appropriate time

Finally you will reach the depression

Comparisons to Wall Street

But the incline you seek

Never comes, sitting on the corner as a bum

Now you're swept under the covers, you're forgotten

Snubbed out like a cigarette bud

Washed out in this verbal flood

This is an expressive tsunami

Erasing you my competition as if I was John Gotti

You'll never stop me

 

 

 

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Jus For My Baby
Hip-hop Rhymes

she jus the type of girl ive bin searchin 4 a while now,

she the type of girl 2 make a nigga feel proud,

my webbs so loud, my face so fresh,

that girl that I'm lukiin at got me lose my breath,

she fine as hell, lukin fresh 2 death,

she's gt me so concentratd,

but the situation wer in is complicatd,

I wan dis girl so much its gt me frustratd,

 baby girl it can jst b me and you,
Jst giv me a chnace 2 prove it, show you ow I do,
If you fink I wnt b here 4 you girl you gt it rong,
I wana put it dwn on ya, c you in dat thong,
I aint tryna mess you up or fuk wit your mind,
I wil do anythin you wan me 2 let urself b mine,
You spoke 2 me the other day and I bin thinkin bout you since,
Baby b my princess so I can b your prince

  -reply by Antwan Shakur

 

 

 

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I'm a papper like you don't even know,

but I got the flow,

 just like I spend my own dough ,

 ya you can call the medicational rhymes,

 a dedicatinal shrin ,

or educatinal lines

but this **** to fresh man how do I do it?

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STOP! && Listen To This, Cause You Can Hear The Thunder &&

The Tremble... See The Lightening Strike Try And Come And You

Get Leveled, Cause... Imma Put My Foot Up On That Pedal, && Ride Out... Time Out!

So Low I Look Up At The Devil, Or I Can Get So High! That Imma

Float By Sit Up On The Cloud, && Watch Biggie's Traits Troll By

Him && Pac On That Low Ride Bumpin' Big L, Watchin Ray Charles

Chillen With Some Gold Eyes

-reply by Jay-Are

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