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Hidden Feelings - My Poem

The69_er
Hidden Feelings
© By Brock W Johnson AKA The69_er

There's a girl
Who is secretly
In love, her secret
Being she can't tell
Anyone

Why? They'd all laugh
And be shocked. The
Boy well he'd never
Give her a second look

She's all confused and
All mixed up. Why does
She feel this way?

All she knows is when
She's with him, she's free.
Free to be who she is
And to be happy.

She just wants to be
With him, to be able to
Tell him how she feels
For him to feel the way
She does

But she'll never be able
To express her love, she'll
Shelter it in her heart for
Always

I've loved him for so long...

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shadowx
aw i like it, it gets across the emotions very well and i can kind of relate to it and imagine myself in this situation (even though Im not) which makes it more effective, at least to me.

If you are in the situation then you might want to think about letting him know. People wont laugh and you only need to tell him, not the world. Everyone feels love and believe me you will so regret it if you don't tell him.

But back on topic its a nice piece of work smile.gif

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The69_er
No offience im a male i just like wrighting poems lol so im not in this situation

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shadowx
QUOTE(The69_er @ Dec 1 2006, 12:29 AM) *

No offience im a male i just like wrighting poems lol so im not in this situation


ahh fair enough! Apologies for assumptions!

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sweet_princess
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If you are in the situation then you might want to think about letting him know. People wont laugh and you only need to tell him, not the world. Everyone feels love and believe me you will so regret it if you don't tell him


No!!! Are you joking? A girl should NEVER tell the guy that she llikes him unless she wants to make a total fool of herself. It is all up to the guy to make the first move...otherwise he does not like her at all.

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The69_er
QUOTE(sweet_princess @ Dec 2 2006, 03:35 AM) *

No!!! Are you joking? A girl should NEVER tell the guy that she llikes him unless she wants to make a total fool of herself. It is all up to the guy to make the first move...otherwise he does not like her at all.


Mabey but some times the guy is shy and does not know what to say so it really depends on the situation.

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bterzian
Wow, that was heart touching. Anyone who reads that could feel the emotions. I wish she can tell her love how she feels, and that he loves her back. How deep. Really, a good write.
smile.gif

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iGuest
~*~little miss kels~*~

WOW!! this is really good!! I think everyone has felt this way one time or another! the guy always makes the first move I don't think its right for the girl too!!

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