Hidden Feelings - My Poem

Hidden Feelings © By Brock W Johnson AKA The69_er There's a girl Who is secretly In love, her secret Being she can't tell Anyone Why? They'd all laugh And be shocked. The Boy well he'd never Give her a second look She's all confused and All mixed up. Why does She feel this way? All she knows is when She's with him, she's free. Free to be who she is And to be happy. She just wants to be With him, to be able to Tell him how she feels For him to feel the way She does But she'll never be able To express her love, she'll Shelter it in her heart for Always I've loved him for so long...

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aw i like it, it gets across the emotions very well and i can kind of relate to it and imagine myself in this situation (even though Im not) which makes it more effective, at least to me.

If you are in the situation then you might want to think about letting him know. People wont laugh and you only need to tell him, not the world. Everyone feels love and believe me you will so regret it if you don't tell him.

But back on topic its a nice piece of work

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No offience im a male i just like wrighting poems lol so im not in this situation

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ahh fair enough! Apologies for assumptions!

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No!!! Are you joking? A girl should NEVER tell the guy that she llikes him unless she wants to make a total fool of herself. It is all up to the guy to make the first move...otherwise he does not like her at all.

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Mabey but some times the guy is shy and does not know what to say so it really depends on the situation.

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Wow, that was heart touching. Anyone who reads that could feel the emotions. I wish she can tell her love how she feels, and that he loves her back. How deep. Really, a good write.

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~*~little miss kels~*~

WOW!! this is really good!! I think everyone has felt this way one time or another! the guy always makes the first move I don't think its right for the girl too!!

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The most painful feeling is to hide your feelings to the person u love .Because if u express your feelings he might laugh at u and break your hurt.And it is logic to keep it for urself.U have to be very lucky if u get positive answer from your love interest.It is very rare to happen. This story touches my heart and it is like it was written for me and I believe to the rest of us.Cupid is play with our mind and hearts.Oxoxoxoo

-reply by KYRIAKI

 

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Warrior Princess
Hidden Feelings

Nice poem... You know what... When I was still in my high school and College years, I also felt that hidden feelings for someone... =) I can 't recognize if  I'm truly in love or just infatuation?hhhmmmmmmm... I cried and cried... Coz I know the heart can be deceiving...But thanks To my Greatest Lover... He told me to WAIT... Wait for the right time, For the right person just for me...He will just come the way you never Expect it... 

To have a crush is normal but never ever try to Help it grow... You know there is that greatest Lover who will love you Unconditionally, the way you are, during your happy face or sad face... =)

Let God writes your love story...

~  Jesus LOVES you... John 3:16 -reply by Lani

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