Check it out, I made it a bit quick because I was in a rush, but I think it turned out good.

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if this is your first one yeah but if it is not well its look pretty bad.

-render is pixelated
-brushing is falt no depth
-colors ok but need more work to them
-needs a border around the sig
-text is ok but work with the anti alias a little bit

need some work, if your just starting out don't rsuh your sigsm the elit siggers spend sweet time with them but they can also whip out something good in the matter of minutes if they know what they are going to design.


still good effort though.

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it is nice. but color does not match with halo. if it was with green and white and grey background it would be better.

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Thanks for the comments guys, I'll be sure to work on them.

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the color doesnt really match the halo theme, your text needs to be improved, and i think the brushing has too much depth and not enough layers of brushing.

You kinda need a border too...

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I think the above comments are correct, especially the one about the Halo colours, Its still alot better than anything I could make so, Well done!

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Background colors don't match the render. The colors are also way too bright...so bright that a lot of the yellow are borderline-white. There is also no blending, so it looks like you just snapped master chief on there. You can also add a border to spice it up just a bit.

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the color red, doesnt really go with the render but it looks a bit good.

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Yeah, if anything, don't go for the overcontrasted look. It's terrible. Otherwise it's not so bad, add a border to finish it though.

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not bad...the render you used is really cool.

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