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Fated Children, No Mercy, Wild Beasts

RazorICE
Here are my poems I had to write for English homework. Please don't be too harsh, I know I suck, but still sad.gif it's not really that easy to write poems.
Note: Wild Beasts was written from sentences found in the book All Quiet On The Western Front by Erich Maria Remarque.

Fated Children
Turn, my Fated Children,
Watch and mourn for the helpless cries,
Watch the men and women die
Don't let them lie: war is terrible,
It''s not patriotic, it's murder
Weep, my Fated Children
Let the doves fly,
Let this war end

Don't fall, my Fated Children,
Don't let the bad men get you,
Don't let the tunnels collapse,
Stop the dying
Millions of souls rising to Heaven,
As the soldiers battle in Hell

Shattered cries, stabbing pains,
Charging into battle, ripping into shreds
The wounded, the dead,
The corpses, the lead
Sleep, my Fated Children
Wait for the end, the end of mourning,
The end of it all
Rise to Heaven, fly

No Mercy
With an evil smile, he slowly lifts his gun
Squeezing the trigger, as his victims run
Tripping, afraid to die, his victims weep and cry
Remorcilessly, he crushes hopes and dreams,
Shattering lives

The women and children, the elderly too
He sprays lead wildly ripping through
Silent screams, clutching hands
He never underestands
He has no mercy

Never tiring, he keeps on firing
Splattering red all on the floor
He doesn't care; it isn't fair
Ending lives, many hearts he tore
Hearts to love nevermore

Dying, killing, falling, tripping
Too much death, no mercy

Wild Beasts
His face has an expression of calm
He says nothing; he is entirely alone now
He still breathes, his face is wet
Alone
Thin, miserable, dirty
The hours pass quick if a man broods
The bones have not lasted out
Meaningless words, he is not the first
His eyes roll, it can't be helped
The others have turned pale
We have become wild beasts.

 

 

 


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OpaQue
ITs tooo touchy and voilent sad.gif

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WeLoveFord
not bad. yes, a little violent, but a whole lot better than i could ever write.

extent of my poem-ness:

there once was a young man named Crumb,
who wouldn't stop chewing his gum
he chewed and he chewed
til his mouth was tight glued
and he walked around looking quite dumb.


yes. see what i mean?

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RazorICE
It's not as bad as some I've heard:
there once was a man named Enis,
who had a very large
foot.

And yes, I admit it's quite violent, but, well, we were meant to do war poems for English homework, you don't expect me to have done a love story for war...?

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Vencheslav
great one. violent of course, but still great. keep goin' \o/

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