I love writing, and I enjoy reading the poems on the forum. I wrote this poem about two years ago, I'll be sure to post more of my works. Like others, I write in reflection of the events of my life, but I also like to do some comical poetry too, you'll see some of that in the future.

But here is my first of many to come, this one is very basic in writing style yet it is one of my favorites...I don't have a title for it though!!! What do you suggest?



Take one's breath away,
You leave him dazed.
Can't get you out of his mind...
Cope with him, either find a way to say goodbye,
or fly high into the evening stars...
So take his hand,
let him shed the tears,
wondering far back,
throughout all the years,
you, yourself hold the key,
to make him stay,
or let him leave,
His hopes are that,
There's no goodbyes,
He fears the chance,
of crumbling inside,
so will he stay,
or will things part,
think with your mind,
listen to your heart.

 

 

 

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