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Another Song!

stevenufc291088
This is another rap song i wrote, i've only done bout 5 or 6 that are finished. I warn you this one does have some strong views in it, and i would appreciate it if you disagree with them please don't reply about how 'wrong' this song is, but i would be greatful if you let me know what u think and leave some feedback.

Thanx!!

No More :

(1st Verse)
I say, f**k war its just people diein’
We don’t want no more of them Tactical slugs flyin’
I let my voice be heard for them mother’s sittin’ cryin’
‘Cos their sons been killed in battle and you just turn a blind eye and
You don’t give a f**k just ‘cos you aint been affected
Its time to start a riot get this s**t corrected
Why’d y’all let Bush get re-elected
He aint done s**t for this world but he wrecked it
Bombed and neglect it
He aint done nothing to earn your respect yet
Why y’all support him I just don’t get s**t
Anyways, enough about Bush let’s shhh for a moment of silence….

That was, out of respect for the soldiers on deck
Why can’t we stop the violence?…

You don’t need a brain
Just send the troops home
You’ve captured Hussein
Now leave Iraq alone
Then I hear some politician say
“But we need the oil”
Then with no delay, I'd say
Why not pay
Or exchange for some soil
Anyway, It’s gotta be better than killing people for it
Ah s**t, what’s the point to this
They only gonna ignore it

(Chorus)
To the one’s who fight
Risk their life
For their country
Patriotism can be so ugly
And we don’t want no more
No we don’t want no war no more
To the people killed
Trust there’s a will
Where there’s a way
‘Cos in our memories y’all still live today
And we don’t want no more
No we don’t want no war no more

(2nd Verse)
Yeah, and it aint just wars between countries we catalysts for
There’s plenty more, types of conflict your be familiar with I’m sure
And since I’m rappin', I might as well mention the rappers beef that’s goin on
Don’t take this lightly rappers have died ‘cos of lyrics in their songs
Take Pac and Biggie for example, their best of friends one minute
Next minute, they’re writing songs dissin each other in it
Then six shots later, and the legend to be 'Pac is dead
Looks like Biggie got his homies to put them shots in his head
But then again, Biggie was also found lying dead
And we read someone shot him in the head
So instead, of becoming living legends they both deceased, from rappers beef
Pac and Biggie rest in peace
And I hope you’re the example for other rappers to turn the leaf
And I'm glad that Jay-Z and Nas beef didn’t last
And that 50 and Ja didn’t go as far as
Poppin shots of at each other
Take advice from a brother
I aint trying to sound like a fairy godmother
But god forgive, leave it where it is
Before you kill one another

(Chorus)
To the one’s who fight
Risk their life
For their country
Patriotism can be so ugly
And we don’t want no more
No we don’t want no war no more
To the people killed
Trust there’s a will
Where there’s a way
‘Cos in our memories y’all still live today
And we don’t want no more
No we don’t want no war no more

(3rd Verse)
Tell me what’s the point in fighting for what you believe in
When what you believe in don’t care whether or not you’re breathing
The only time it’s right is when, what you believe in is yourself
There comes an end to everyone’s life
But the path aint chosen by no one else
I can see the light, at the end, but the tunnel’s so long
It’ll take time to heal the world
To create right from wrong
And the way were going, World War Three’s just around the corner
And if Mother Earth dies, how the hell we gonna mourn her?
And you know, I feel responsible being part of the human race
‘Cos we’re the cause of the problems as people we have to face
But without wrongs, rights just wouldn’t feel good
Just like without rain, sunny days wouldn’t feel like they should
All the same, there’s a line, we never should have crossed
And it’s cost us the lives of thousands that we’ve lost
Over the top is where we’ve gone
But let’s not let it carry on...
...Let’s make it stop

(Chorus)
To the one’s who fight
Risk their life
For their country
Patriotism can be so ugly
And we don’t want no more
No we don’t want no war no more
To the people killed
Trust there’s a will
Where there’s a way
‘Cos in our memories y’all still live today
And we don’t want no more
No we don’t want no war no more

 

 

 


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savge17
nice dude, but I dont like rap that much. LOL that would probably work for heavy metal also:P. But nice dude seems like took you a while to write that!

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stevenufc291088
lol thnx, yeah takes ages getting a song right!!

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system
Damn dudde those are some **** awesome lyrics man. like that guy said, im not that much into rap and those would be good for heavy metal tongue.gif. HAHA i would never be able to make a song like that. Keep it upp!!

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zerogravity
s**t that was way coooool.

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BordaForx
It's pretty good I guess. It gets kind of vulgar though.

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gameratheart
I love it. I'm a big fan of rap (well, the more sung types of it) and I think this song really sums up the worlds problems in the way they should be said. Brilliant song...

...And yeah, I suppose those lyrics could be used for Heavy Metal as well...

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rickyRconti
QUOTE(NDPA @ Aug 13 2006, 09:13 PM) *
I love it. I'm a big fan of rap (well, the more sung types of it) and I think this song really sums up the worlds problems in the way they should be said. Brilliant song...

...And yeah, I suppose those lyrics could be used for Heavy Metal as well...

i love it

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