I am a musician and a lyricist. I wanted to get your opinion on some of my lyrics. They are for my band LadyKiller Cassanova. The first one is
And I Forgot the Words to the Greatest Song I Ever Wrote
Love like a river run dry
Love like a river count time
Yeah count time until we die
Cause we're all human above and beneath the skin
We bury our lovers underneath the weight of our sin
Then we just keep piling more dirt on
Eyes like a river run dry
The wells of her eyes no longer cry
Yeah eyes no longer cry
She yells across the kitchen "you throw our life away"
He promises his children he'll return to them someday
Then he keeps piling more guilt on
Hope like a river run dry
Their children think happiness is a lie
Yeah happiness is a lie
and the second is
Of Late I Dream of You
You always told me you don't want to throw your life away
And I only live for the moment because I forgot yesterday
That was fine for time but it couldn't always be that way
You said you needed stability you couldn't always be afraid
Of where we were heading or what I would say
We'll I'm saying I think I can change.
So what do I have to do to beg you to stay?
I can kneel on the floor cross my fingers and pray
But would that really bring you back?
Tell me what you think, and if you like them I will post more.
