Nov 22, 2009

My Lyrics - 1st song i wrote tell me what u think

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My Lyrics - 1st song i wrote tell me what u think

yankee22k3
This is the first song i have ever written it is more of a rap with a slow tempo

CHICAGO

yo girl i only knew ya for 2 days

but in my town i wish u would stay

girl i wish u would be wit me

cuz i promise u the only girl i would see

girl u kno i would never cheat ya

never deciet ya, only be real wit ya

Chicago i swear to always be loyal

cuz u the only woman i wanna spoil

girl i hope u realize this is comin from my heart

i said girl i wish u and me would never be apart

but in the end the fact remains

CHORUS

Chicago <(slow chant) i hardly even knew ya

Chicago the girl i'll always be tru to

Chicago the one i always be down for

Chicago without u my heart is forever sore


For those still confused i aint rappin bout the city

im speakin bout the lady who made all my jewelry

i met her at vegas, sort of

but she was more beautiful than anything i ever thought of

Chicago u had me wishin i was kanye

but not for the dough only to live in the same state

that is blessed with ur presence

cuz girl for u i go toe to toe with 50 cent and

girl u gotta kno that i aint playin games

i just hope that someday u'll say my name

but once again the fact remains

CHORUS

Girl i kno i didnt even kiss ya

but that aint gonna stop me from missin ya

Chicago maybe i dont even know ya

but i just want the chance to show ya

that my feelings for u are real

and u are the only one that can heal

the damage that has been done to my heart

from all the ladies who would have no part

on my search for love

but Chicago u are the one

but the fact still reamins

CHORUS

 

 

 


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lordofthesabbath
Excellent song, this is the kind of lyrics Rap needs these days since rap is mostly about sex drugs and you know the rest. Good job, i liked it alot. Keeep up the good work man.

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Pdrive
This is a cool song - nice to have a rap song that isnt about killing people for once.

Keep it up - what do you plan to do with your songs?

A career in the music industry is a wonderful, wonderful thing.


PDrive

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Cronicle
I like it I got some lyrics I recorded my self but this is cool too!!

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HYRAX
New to this forum - but thought i'd give you all a verse I been writing at work today.

I came to ur friends to make it easy
But all of the time I had my eyes on u
I said to u, will u dance with me
but I cant dance girl so will u talk to me

Maybe we could take some extacy
maybe come outside u could blaze with me
maybe u could even come home with me
girl ur my fantasy

nah nah nah dont trample me
i'm f*ck'd in the head, i'm kind of mad you see
I'm not one of them lads all brash and sleazy
at the same time girl im not f*ckin needy

maybe im talkin awkwardly
maybe ur thinkin is he stalkin me?
maybe this skunk has got me paranoid
am I talkin to a girl or have i turned to an android

i need a dance for this like soulja boy
but more gay than soulja boy if thats possible

improbbable like a fake hair follicle
the way the breder fronts
is simply incredible

im loosing my mind and im lost to my own kind
stuck in a high rise
emerging at night time

time for a white line
watch for the bacon rind comin in
and bustin toilet doors open (crash!)

my heart is broken,
the floors awoken and the bouncers chokin

one last toke and i reach for my groceries
step over the body cos its time to flee

reach for my girl
scream its time to leave
she looks at me
like shes never seen me!


A bit random - but sums up them messey nights - Peace!

 

 

 


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rickyRconti
i really like it acually....keep it up

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