What do you think of this website?
It has a lot but can you give me some tips?

http://www.freewebs.com/xboxspot

not much for a site about facts and info about a product that is junk and with the xbox 360 having like alot of problems don't see it becoming big any time soon.

It could use a lot more detail and maybe a custom made template maybe. It isn't that bad but the ads and stuff take up too much space. The forums look ok but once again the ads get in the way and the big Xbox logo sort of ruins the whole thing. It looks out of place. Make a custom logo that fits in with the forum. I don't think the snow is necessary.

It's a tidy layout although I'd probably get rid of the falling snow, and the music in the background of the site is a big no no..

Perhaps, assuming you know a bit of HTML, use a WYSIWYG editor such as Dreamweaver and start creating some simple layouts to start with. It doesnt have to be flash if you're a beginner, but at least make it simple to read and understand.

Freewebs default templates I dislike. Make your own or download a free one. I also hate music on sites, makes me just want to close them. Also, freewebs sucks because of the bulky ads. I'd advise you get a new host.