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Jan 17 2008, 07:21 PM
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Super Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 395 Joined: 30-December 07 From: Norway Member No.: 55,479 |
Hello. So I made this layout image, and I would like to hear what you think about it. I did not spend to much time, but some. Most of the time was used to find images, and apply a vintage effect. I think it came out okey, but that is my opinion. I am not to good with photoshop, and you can say that it looks a bit "piczo-ish". Haha, new word.
Anyway, I can say that the "theme" is a bit related to poverty, and such things. I am not quite happy about the blending some places. It is quite different from old ones I have made, that where full off celebs and such things. (Yup, even more "piczo-ish.") I had some brushes on it, but I did something wrong when I was adding the color bubbles, so they kind of disappeared. Click the link below Click here. =) |
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Jan 18 2008, 03:13 AM
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Trap17 Maverick ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 1,088 Joined: 5-January 06 From: Michigan, USA Member No.: 16,652 |
Personally I like it a lot. It is very tastefully done. I do have 2 concerns tho.
The quote about fairness mid-left is a little difficult to read. Perhaps you could sharpen up the text somewhat. You might space the leading just a bit further apart. The lines seem a little too cramped together. The other concern is the spacing at the top. The step down menu is really unique, but leaves a lot of empty space as you move from left to right. Do you have any plans to do something to fill in this area? |
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Jan 18 2008, 03:22 AM
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|||[ n00b King ]||| ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 642 Joined: 20-June 07 From: Auckland Member No.: 45,102 |
Also I think if you added some kind of border 1px or so not too dark around the image it will look abit nicer. or even add a drop shadow around it so it dosent look as though it blends in as much with the background.
Good job |
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