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The Web

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Post #1 post Jul 4 2005, 05:58 PM
I wrote this when I was 14 and I still remember it.

I spun this web and set it up so it would set me free
It wasn't long before I found this web was spinning me
Up, down and all around
It's out of my control
Now I'm trapped inside this web I've woven in my soul.

I suppose it could use some revision but I like to stick with the original text.
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Post #2 post Jul 5 2005, 07:05 AM
you have trapped in it? hoho~smile.gif but it's really interesting when we were young.
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Post #3 post Jul 5 2005, 05:28 PM
I don't think I understood what I was saying when I wrote it. dry.gif
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Post #4 post Jul 5 2005, 05:59 PM
That's pretty interesting piece you had written some years ago. Looking back at the past life, including mine I came to know that something never changes.... think about those. hehe.

And finally you are trapped in this 17 web. Its good! Keep posting such stuffs.
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