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Jul 4 2005, 05:58 PM
I wrote this when I was 14 and I still remember it. I spun this web and set it up so it would set me free It wasn't long before I found this web was spinning me Up, down and all around It's out of my control Now I'm trapped inside this web I've woven in my soul. I suppose it could use some revision but I like to stick with the original text. |
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Jul 5 2005, 07:05 AM
you have trapped in it? hoho~ |
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Jul 5 2005, 05:59 PM
That's pretty interesting piece you had written some years ago. Looking back at the past life, including mine I came to know that something never changes.... think about those. hehe. And finally you are trapped in this 17 web. Its good! Keep posting such stuffs. |
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