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Nov 8 2005, 11:30 PM
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Super Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 276 Joined: 4-August 05 Member No.: 10,273 |
There are still links missing (and about page) but other content is present, so tell me what do you think?
Here it is: http://www.ciroxyz.trap17.com/avijacija |
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Nov 8 2005, 11:46 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 873 Joined: 30-July 04 Member No.: 246 |
I would just like to point out the TOS:
QUOTE All websites must be in English to qualify for free hosting. We do this to ensure that Accounts are legal and have permissable contents. The design itself isn't bad, but you better translate it to English. It doesn't appear to contain anything illegal, but as I don't speak the language it's in, I don't know - and neither would most of the Trap17 staff. |
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Nov 9 2005, 03:05 AM
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Newbie [Level 1] ![]() Group: Members Posts: 11 Joined: 9-November 05 Member No.: 13,999 |
QUOTE(ciroxyz @ Nov 8 2005, 06:30 PM) There are still links missing (and about page) but other content is present, so tell me what do you think? Here it is: http://www.ciroxyz.trap17.com/avijacija I would rate it at.....6 out of 10! |
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Nov 9 2005, 03:34 AM
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Premium Member ![]() Group: Banned Posts: 160 Joined: 10-July 05 From: Bogotá, Colombia, South America. Member No.: 9,238 |
good work!, it's pretty cool, i like the simplicity on the navigation, the colors, and off cors the content, but i don't understand your language, what is it?, russian, or something like that?.
besides you own a greatful logo and it's original. the distribution of the site is also great, you can navigate in the site even if you don't speak whatever you speak. at last, but not least, maybe you could add google adds, and put some animations or improve some graphics, but it's great!, good work! |
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Nov 9 2005, 04:38 AM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 4,071 Joined: 24-July 05 From: Linix, DOS and Windows…the good, the bad and the ugly Member No.: 9,787 ![]() |
I like it. Nice and clean layout. Light colours. Easy to navigate in (wish I knew the language). 8.5/10 if you want a number. Took a while to load. Can you lessen the 'weight' of the pages at all? Possibly reduce the image size and density?
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Nov 9 2005, 04:54 AM
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.::UniCorN::. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 973 Joined: 19-September 04 From: Dalian CHN Member No.: 1,192 |
well,it is very nice and clear from looks.it is full of news or history of aircraft...so pity that i could not read that
overall,pretty good site. |
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Nov 9 2005, 07:16 AM
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Premium Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 178 Joined: 13-October 04 From: NSW, Australia Member No.: 1,713 |
nice work!! it took a little while to load on mine too, though. maybe reduce the quality on the images on the home page or something, that'd help. Nice and simple to navigate.
great stuff mate. peace out |
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Nov 9 2005, 10:52 AM
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Super Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 276 Joined: 4-August 05 Member No.: 10,273 |
QUOTE(Spectre @ Nov 9 2005, 01:46 AM) I would just like to point out the TOS: The design itself isn't bad, but you better translate it to English. It doesn't appear to contain anything illegal, but as I don't speak the language it's in, I don't know - and neither would most of the Trap17 staff. Yea, I know that the language should be english. But this is not my "official" trap17 site. It's located at http://ciroxyz.trap17.com/avijacija (notice /avijacija) and it was made for purpose of testing W3C validation service and for fun. My official site at http://ciroxyz.trap17.com will be in english and those other sites (avijacija and http://ciroxyz.trap17.com/SDA) will have another (paid) hosting. Anyway, sorry for violating the TOS. |
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Nov 9 2005, 12:41 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 630 Joined: 12-August 05 From: Melbourne, Australia Member No.: 10,624 |
The site has a nice clean look to it, looks professional, like a business site. The sections appear well laid out and informative, even if I can't read the language. Navigation is simple and clear, even if I can't read the language.
Here's my suggestions for improvement The Piper Warrior III picture used for the background image is pretty much a waste unless you are going to repeat the image. With just the 1 image it is often covered by other graphics and therefore pointless. The History section has too much text on one page for my liking. With a large amount of text, visitors might tire of reading and therefore your message will be lost. It might be better to break the history up into sections, perhaps make sections that cover a range of years so you have multiple pages to the section but with less text on each page rather than 1 large block of text. In the gallery it would have been nice to see captions under the images that tell you what plane it is and how big the image is. On the Fizika page, (not sure what that means, it looks like a description of how aeroplanes work), some of the images have English text and some don't. Use of a uniform language would be better if possible, even if you have to change the text on the images yourself. Looking at those images, I think it would been better if you cleaned up the text on them, some of it is very hard to read. Load speed of the pages was quite good for me, even if I am on a dial-up connection. Perhaps the Internet was a bit congested when others were looking or you have changed things since they made their comments. Overall, I'd say a nicely laid out site that appears to be very informative, well done. 8/10 |