 Poem I Made Yesterday Night |
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 Nov 1 2005, 07:07 AM
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-OLD ADMIN-  Group: Members Posts: 1,184 Joined: 20-June 04 From: the bath-tub... Member No.: 50  |
this is just a short poem i made last night:
Where does love exually park? as for some of us its light, and for others its dark. Love, for everyone different to see, as we adapt, to what we want love to be. Some want it fast, others slow. Maybe love needs time to grow. Sometimes we even end up quick, as we see your love spiral down, like a burning stick. Thinking when will i find 'That One', remembering you thought you found it, when you just past love begon. As the myth of the 'One Love' grows old, It is in our hearths where its only beginning to unfold. so did you like it? |
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Nov 1 2005, 07:37 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 106 Joined: 11-October 05 Member No.: 12,810 |
That's a very nice poem, well done on making it. How long did it take?
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Nov 1 2005, 09:56 AM
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-OLD ADMIN- Group: Members Posts: 1,184 Joined: 20-June 04 From: the bath-tub... Member No.: 50 |
4 minutes
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Nov 1 2005, 10:19 AM
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Member [Level 1] Group: Members Posts: 57 Joined: 31-August 05 Member No.: 11,348 |
Pretty cool, good job.
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Nov 1 2005, 04:55 PM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing.  Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 3,882 Joined: 24-July 05 From: In Trouble Again... still? Member No.: 9,787  |
Hearths or Hearts?
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Nov 2 2005, 10:07 PM
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-OLD ADMIN- Group: Members Posts: 1,184 Joined: 20-June 04 From: the bath-tub... Member No.: 50 |
lol... i'm not english, my grammar isn't perfect
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Oct 17 2007, 04:59 AM
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Member [Level 2] Group: Members Posts: 80 Joined: 17-October 07 From: Minnesota Member No.: 51,674 |
I like it.
And it does touch a good point on how everyone just see love differently. I mean, just your poem say some want it slow and some want it fast. I wonder if for you, you want it slow or fast. To me, slow but not too slow. Normal? Maybe ahahh. |
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Oct 18 2007, 03:01 PM
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Newbie [Level 2] Group: Members Posts: 29 Joined: 16-October 07 Member No.: 51,617 |
sounds awesome. cant believe it didnt take longer.good job.
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Oct 19 2007, 06:07 PM
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Member [Level 1] Group: Members Posts: 66 Joined: 17-October 07 From: Canada Member No.: 51,664 |
that's too straight.. btw, it's nice
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Dec 28 2007, 06:15 PM
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