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> My Poem -- Failure
shadowx
post May 4 2007, 04:45 PM
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Failure

Do you spend your whole life
Trying for one goal
Just to stand by
And watch it all go?

Do you give all you've got
And then a little more
Just to stand by
And watch it hit the floor?

Do you wish for one thing
And pray it will come true
Just to stand by
As your plans fall through?

What if you've no choice
But to try and try your best
Just to stand by
And fail like the rest?

I've done all I can
I'm all I can be
But I'm still standing by
As she walks past me


And there ya go! I wrote it in one of my lessons because i was bored and it sums up my situation at the moment and such. And along with the poem id like to advise everyone that if you get an opportunity dor someone, or something, you want in life do not let it go because i promise you regretting not doing something is a horrible feeling!

Now let me know what you all think? i dont think its my best as i wrote it during bordem in my class, but there ya go
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