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Nov 16 2005, 07:25 PM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 3,971 Joined: 24-July 05 From: In Trouble Again... still? Member No.: 9,787 ![]() |
Well, it is just about time I got this unit out on the web for people to see and criticise.
My pet project lately is a site for the local Minor Hockey Association. I know it is not perfect (what site is), but it does what they asked for (more actually) and I am pleased with the features. This version is full of 'dummy content'. At one point, it validated strict, but this copy has a few (59) missing end tags that are being fixed, so please ignore the w3c validator link. And the maps on the contact page aren't ready yet. They are getting built as we speak. Other than those two items, I think it is ready. Thanks for having a look and please leave some comments for things that are missing or don't work other than the above noted items. Minor Hockey Webpage |
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Nov 16 2005, 07:44 PM
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Incest is a game the whole family can play. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 1,216 Joined: 11-February 05 From: Heaven Member No.: 3,709 |
Site Review
Okay the first thing I see when I load the page is a glaring blue background which burns my eyes. A couple of seconds after which I see the proper background image. So, I think the blue background should be removed. Secondly, on the navigation menu you have headings which group the links. There is nothing defining the difference between a heading and a link (ie underlined text etc). I like the way that the site works well in firefox and isn't one of those "ie only" sites and how the pages load nice and quickly on the 56k <20s on first page load and <8s thereafter All in all a rating of: 9/10 Suggestions: Remove blue background, define the difference between links and headers on the navigation menu and maybe create 403, 404 error pages etc for the site... |
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Nov 16 2005, 08:20 PM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 3,971 Joined: 24-July 05 From: In Trouble Again... still? Member No.: 9,787 ![]() |
QUOTE(cmatcmextra @ Nov 16 2005, 12:44 PM) Site Review Suggestions: Remove blue background, define the difference between links and headers on the navigation menu and maybe create 403, 404 error pages etc for the site... Hmmm, I have no idea where the Blue comes from. But I will do something about it if I can. And the error pages are in the works. You must have tried the "team" button on the top nav bar. One file (that one) failed to load on the ftp for some reason. *Fixed*. |
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Nov 16 2005, 08:23 PM
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Newbie [Level 3] ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 40 Joined: 14-November 05 From: Australia Member No.: 14,269 |
in your "*/nolinkyet.html" page the left menu has disapeared; other than that it looks like an excellent site
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Nov 16 2005, 09:06 PM
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Moderator ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2,325 Joined: 8-March 05 From: Mawson, Antarctica Member No.: 4,254 |
Here's a quick tip. Make your navigation links bigger. I just feel that your visitors should be able to find what they're looking for easily.
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Nov 16 2005, 09:11 PM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 3,971 Joined: 24-July 05 From: In Trouble Again... still? Member No.: 9,787 ![]() |
QUOTE(Chameleon @ Nov 16 2005, 01:23 PM) in your "*/nolinkyet.html" page the left menu has disapeared; other than that it looks like an excellent site Yes, planned that way. The nesting of the file structure was getting a bit complex, so I eliminated the announcement bar for the second level of files. Might add it back when I have some time free. Haven't decided yet. |
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Nov 16 2005, 10:20 PM
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Advanced Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 102 Joined: 23-September 05 From: Ontario Canada Member No.: 12,186 |
Overall I really like this site.
That is strange though with the blue screen flashing in the way it does before it goes to the normal background. Does it have something to do with transition? It looks like you've worked very hard for the minor hockey association and I hope they appreciate what you've done! |
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Nov 17 2005, 07:29 AM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 3,971 Joined: 24-July 05 From: In Trouble Again... still? Member No.: 9,787 ![]() |
Thanks to everyone for their comments. All valid, of course, and each of them will be considered before the project is finalized.
Thanks to all of the fine folks in the html/xhtml forum for the current and past threads which assisted greatly during the construction of this project. |
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Nov 17 2005, 08:03 AM
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Incest is a game the whole family can play. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 1,216 Joined: 11-February 05 From: Heaven Member No.: 3,709 |
QUOTE(jihaslip) Hmmm, I have no idea where the Blue comes from. But I will do something about it if I can. I have never touched xhtml colours (and if they're the same as html ones, it proves my ignorance even more CODE body { margin: 1em; background: #00f url(grey.gif) repeat; font: 0.85em Arial,Helvetica,Verdana, sans-serif, serif; } If I'm right #00f must be the XHTML colour-code for blue and therefore your site is displaying that background before the background image is loading. |