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post May 29 2007, 02:14 AM
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Well, my website has now been switched from rifehost, to here. Which is already 120% better by the way. Tramposch and I have worked on this site for about 1-2 weeks. It is still not done though. We are going to be working on it more yet, and probably more after that. It's in php, and it is supposed to resemble www.runescape.com, which I think it does a pretty dang good job at that.

We are going to be adding more links, and advertisements on our website. But for now it looks pretty good. The "Play enrit" will be the webclient to play our game, but for now we only have a downloadable client. We have our own forums hosted through trap17 and mybb. We had 50+ members on our other board, which really sucked, so we just wanted to switch before we got like 100 members. The server itself has over 250 character files, which is actually pretty good if you think about it. So please rate my site, that tramposch helped build smile.gif

http://www.enrit.trap17.com
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post May 29 2007, 06:00 AM
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Really nice looking website. I was searching for that "Old paper" background for quite some time, and now i see you found one really great looking. Thanks for that biggrin.gif.
Looks like IE doesn't display your page correct so u might try to work on that. validator.w3.org shows some errors on your HTML 4.01 transitional encoding, i would suggest you to fix that.
Also i suggest that you use xHTML strict encoding. It's great for getting rid of most Quirks modes both in IE and Firefox, and your Google rank is higher when using that encoding.
GFX on website is really nice, and shows that you have sense for design.
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post May 30 2007, 01:14 AM
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Im not really fond of the design of the site, change it. And when it comes to content, just add some more. Good thinking though, as it is a good idea for your site, just the lack of content, and maybe some design changes would do you well.
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post May 30 2007, 01:35 AM
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The site appears a bit strange in IE. That - and some images were blocked out (perhaps this is more to do with the connection from my end). I quite like the banner, though. Simple and unique.
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post May 30 2007, 02:04 AM
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The logo is unreadable. The links to two images are broken, possibly more. You use a table based design. The design is copied from the Runescape website. Be a tad bit original, it can pay off.
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post May 30 2007, 02:07 AM
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If you made this template with only 1 thing in mind, make it match the one at http://www.runescape.com, then you have done a good job! It actually looks like a direct rip-off of their site by having a look at their CSS... tongue.gif Is this the actual case? biggrin.gif

The banner looks quite good, goes well with the RuneScape feel to all of it, but still you could work a bit more on it I guess, and that would really help a lot to bring it out more. The algae/grass you've tried to put onto the rocks needs somewhat more improvement according to me.

I'm having a look at it in Firefox and I guess you should align the old-paper-scroll like thing a bit on the top, to have it in level with the brown-bordered box in the left.

And even the bullets could be made a bit more exciting or different, plan squares just aren't looking good in here... Maybe some random rocks like the ones in the logo or something like that, or a little sword! You are still working on it so I guess you'll fix most of it up soon.

And yes, really nice! smile.gif
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post May 30 2007, 04:25 PM
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Just to let you know the site does not work well with mac computers... tongue.gif
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