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chappill
post Jun 2 2008, 05:42 PM
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Numbers just came in and from last month (the second month of running) I got 156 unique visitors =].

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so if you're getting money for the ads a ".com" domain wouldnt hurt.

Na I'm on banner swap so I don't get paid I get clicks =] I'm really trying to get more visitors and I am taking your advice, but I@m abit busy with school, so it's step by slow step.
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amirborna
post Jun 5 2008, 04:43 PM
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Hi Chappil I think your site is really cool.
One thing that helps a lot of sites is a community, where people visit everyday on things such as a forum

Use fantastico installer in your vistapanel and install forum called PHPBB3, it's really nice

One mor thing to help is changing name
95GMS sounds cool but it's hard to remember, giving it a word name makes it easier for people to remember and spread the word

You could move that advertisement banner from the top, give it a nice banner, and your advertisement in a better spot

good job on your site and keep it up, wait till you see mine kekekke
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chappill
post Jun 5 2008, 04:47 PM
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Lol there is a forum, look on the top bar it says Our forum lol.
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amirborna
post Jun 5 2008, 04:55 PM
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Oops didn't see my bad.
First thing you should do is get a badass blue banner that is nice

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y94/Tenku...a/BANNERRyu.png

something of the sorts, doesn't have to be a render on there just some nice abstract that pops out, goes good with the black.

If you get my drift biggrin.gif
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chappill
post Jun 5 2008, 05:25 PM
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All the banners are there on banner swap, im going to get rid of the one on the top in the next few days, I have just updated the 'Games!' area of the site so it corresponds with the homepage, tell me what you think (I've been away eating so sorry for the late post).
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post Jun 5 2008, 07:50 PM
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QUOTE(chappill @ May 17 2008, 06:02 PM) *
So i followed jlhaslip's advice and got rid of the .tk domain, still no more visitors. I've told everyone on my contact list, posted it to blogs and forums and still not many people visit my site... What's wrong with it, i just spent 30 minutes (not long but hey) re-vamping the forum so its now friendly to guests (i think that might of been a mistake but hey). It has 95 ish good working games, a guest book, its on Google, it has a search engine, contact us form about us form nearly everything i can think of.

So please tell me whats wrong with it and what i can do to make it better =]

Thanks in advance.

:/ oops i forgot a link, excuse me please =] http://www.chappill.trap17.com/.

And i would buy a domain but I'm 14 and have no paypal =[

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chappill
post Jun 5 2008, 09:15 PM
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Dude you just copied my first post and thats it... Not being mean or out just... yeah abit random?
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post Jun 7 2008, 12:57 PM
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It looks like your using over people script's instead of using your own; your contact form isn't made by yourself, nor are the forums or the games, this not only makes it look very unprofessional and unwelcoming, but also makes it look like an amateur attempt, but because your 14 I guess its okay.

Also why do you have adverts on there? that makes it look even worse!

The chat isn't yours either, with a bit of PHP knowledge you could create all of that yourself, and give it a feel of your website, each page seems to have a different theme, not helped at all by using other people's scripts.

People have probably visited, but have no reason to come back, perhaps make a members area where you have to register, login, etc...

This would make a world of difference!
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