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Nov 26 2007, 08:59 PM
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A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing. ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 4,081 Joined: 24-July 05 From: Linix, DOS and Windows…the good, the bad and the ugly Member No.: 9,787 ![]() |
All of the above, plus:
The header Logo needs to have a border the same style as the other div's to maintain a consistent look to the page. I like the simplicity of your page. Nice and clean layout. |
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Nov 26 2007, 10:25 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584 |
Holy cow... that quite a bit everyone! By the way... I changed the color schemes slightly... its all I have time for yet...
page background: #727272 text areas background: #e5e5e5 text color: #000000 So are these easy to read, and do they look better in general? I think that they contrast way better... I have to change my blog yet.... My blog colors are still the same as they original colors for now.... I'll change it later (http://kansuke.2kart.trap17.com for reference to old colors) Also, whoever asked who made my logo... I made the banner if thats what your reffering to when you say logo... Jhaslip, I made a border around the banner.... solid black... does it look good? I'll build an email form later... that probably a way better idea than just listing my email... I'll make me some thumbnails later too... I noticed full images with size edits loaded a little slower... I'll fix it asap I'll try to add lightbox later. Thanks again for your critiques... thanks for the help & coments in general! They have reeeeaaaallllyyyy helped... |
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Nov 27 2007, 01:08 AM
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Not a bad site for a beginner but there are numerous things that can be done to fix your site. First of all, i would rework the layout just a little bit. It is nice and clean but its hard to see your sections. I would add a sidebar that contains your links on it since most people look for them there and then i would create a container to hold your whole site. The background between sections on your main page is a bit wierd and just does not let your site flow well. So if you put a container, you can set its background a shader or 2 light than the background so you can differentiate the main part of your site from the backgroud. From here, i would add a bit more color and a few more images to make the site look a bit more attractive and then you will have a pretty good site.
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Nov 27 2007, 10:10 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584 |
Ok I've fixed a few things so far:
the navigation is now beside the main content area instead of at the top the contact page now has a form instead of just my email... From fffanatics QUOTE ...and then i would create a container to hold your whole site. The background between sections on your main page is a bit wierd and just does not let your site flow well. What exactly do you mean...? I don't get what your saying, and I want to fix it... This post has been edited by KansukeKojima: Nov 27 2007, 10:12 PM |
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Dec 2 2007, 01:24 PM
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I like it to be honest. He has done the basics for the website, he can easly expand and change the style. But the coding and the actual foudation of the website is complete. He has done the easy part, all that is left is to add a fancy style.
I admire you, I always go straight into the design first. I should, and will, start with the coding and finish with the style. |
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Dec 3 2007, 07:17 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584 |
Thank you...
I fixed the thumbnails problem too.... I actually made some thumbnails.... loads waaaayyyy faster... I'm also, eventually, going to design a background image.... but not right now, because I've found it hard to get the perfect colorscheme.... later I will do it when I have enough time... |
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