i am not sure what i could tell you to improve on, becuase i don't know what you going for. Other then that it looks pretty good bro.

For for freewebs page, it's pretty good. So when are you going to switch to Trap17? Haha. The top menu bar, is slightly bigger then the rest, change that and it's be near flawless. I assume the videos page is blank for a reason? Maybe but a little place holder "Coming soon" or something there. Where you give the proxy site, try adding more. A lot of schools block them right away.

Good job on your first site btw!

Pretty nice design, especially if it's your first and for Freewebs. I love the smiley face Colors work nice and perfectly. Of course there is always room for improvement but it's not really necessary at this point in time. On your next template try adding more graphical content to spruce it up a bit. Nice job overall, good job.

I think you used freewebs well. Most of the time, people make them tacky. Yours is nice, simple, and to the point.

Well before I tried making a site with only learning a little html I never actually made a site I did it like half way then after that I learned more html. And also FreeWebs is simple. But Trap17 is confusing even the manuals are confusing.(Make a manual for a manual Hmmmm?)

I like it very much sooo =D. Its got a very simplistic but complicated design, and I love sites like that, and i usually go twards that style when i make mine. Good job on it =]

My new Site

Here is my new site I had to change hosting service because the other one did not provide enough space for me. Well actually it did but you can only have twenty pages! I find that unfair. I hope you like my new site. Same idea new look new hosting.

well its nto a bad looking site, it is a bit plain tho.. but the darkness fitss its theme i gues.. just keep it up