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#1
Aug 1 2006, 10:46 PM
Hey i made this site about a week ago. It is a fantasy sports league site where we paly 3 sports. This is my first time making a website so please be honest. some of the links dont work yet because it is still under construction. http://www.usfsl.trap17.com/ Thanks in advance! |
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#2
Aug 2 2006, 12:21 AM
It looks nice. Personally, all the blue bothers my eyes, but it's not horribly bad. I like it. Good luck with it!
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#3
Aug 2 2006, 12:40 AM
Very Nice! You have put a lot of effort into this. I only have one suggestion about the navigation area on the left. I would make all the button text the same size; probably going to have to be the size of the longest line: Team Pages. I would also left justify them all. This will clean up that area nicely and be more consistent. The different sized text kind of detracts from the overall neatness of the page. I would give it a 9/10.
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#4
Aug 2 2006, 07:57 AM
Overall the site looks good, but there are just a few niggling little problems. The main text down the centre of the page doesn't actually fit to the width of the box. The text overflows on the left hand side by a few pixels. There's also an odd space under the navigation links before the blue background image reappears, and I have no idea whats causing it. Other than those two problems your site looks OK, and you could also design a custom banner for the forums, to make it look more 'personal' to your site.
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#5
Aug 2 2006, 08:20 AM
I like your site a lot, here are a few things to look at (as some have already mentioned) sorry if I sound mean, l please take this constructively. 1. On the right side by the word baseball, there is a black space, try to fill that in so your bar is the same color the whole way. 2. Maybe try creating a box (by adding a bottom bar) around the word "Shoutbox" and "Navigation". 3. Lower the left navigation a bit so there is a clear space between it and "Navigation". 4. The "Refresh" and "Smiles" buttons should show the whole text. This might be hard to do, just experiment with it. 5. Possibly elminate the border that occurs when you go over the menu options at the top. This might be accomplished by adding "border=0" or something. I am not quite sure how to get rid of it. 6. Make "News and Notes:" not spill off the edge of the background. This also applies to the (long) list of rules and "Welcome to the USFSL" introduction to the site. 9.5/10 - Very well put togeather with only minor errors. |
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#6
Aug 2 2006, 12:06 PM
Your website looks great friend. I like the colors and the layout. My suggestion is that you make the shout box a little bigger so that there is no need to scroll to view it. All others are great. Keep the work going on.
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#7
Aug 2 2006, 12:24 PM
It looks pretty good. The only thing i'd change would be to make the 'United States' text in the logo a bit brighter. I'm not sure if it was your intention to dull it a bit to emphasise the 'fantasy sports league' text - if it was i'll shut up |
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#8
Aug 2 2006, 02:45 PM
It's nice. The "team pages" font is smaller than the other links. I know it's probably because it didn't fit with a big font, but try making all the links the same size, so that it looks more organized. But other than that, it's pretty good =)
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Posts: 288 Joined: 18-June 06 From: Croatia, Zagreb Member No.: 25,336 |
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#9
Aug 2 2006, 02:59 PM
well i have seen this layout somwhere on turtorial site. you didnt tried to do site on your own? but if you are beggining it s great start
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#10
Aug 2 2006, 04:10 PM
The colour hurts my eyes, it's a bit too dark and we don't see the text on the header very well. The text in blocks is a bit too big and goes out. But I like it, I'd give you 8. |
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