hey i m new to this forum. i just wanted a platform 2 post ma creations so i landed up here .anyone who can grant life(music) to my lyrics i'll b very thankful............so here goes ma song

FLOPPED BUT GALLOPED

For a second Yeah! just for a second Imagine yourself as a lost rapper
when u have to fight your worst fears
when u need to move on while everyone sneers
when your welcome is done with cans of beers
now thats the place to control your tears
n u need to smile on stage ,no matter if u are filled with rage
to the top but you need not stop
your knees shouldn't drop
your breathe shouldn't block
cuz believe it or not
but u haven't flopped.
there is always hope as u may have seen in daily soaps
u gotta be the person who is already dead but who'll come back again
just to shoot ya in head.
now go to your bed n think of that bet which ya made with your friend
but lost instant.
wake up,do i need to shake ya up??
just go for a fast n raise your mast
n prepare yourself for the biggest nuclear holocaust.
revise you rhymes as many times
as you may hear the tinkling of chimes.
travel back for the crowd is waiting
not for your song but to screw you off if u again start shaking.
just accumulate your energy like Mamta Banerjee
n start your rap,don't make it look like crap.
it should be clear n loud n not down n out.
but that doesn't mean that u will shout.
show them middle finger if they start their giggle
n soon u'll see that they are ready to mingle.
u won't believe its actually happening
that u are actually rapping
n there will be no devil with its teeth snapping.
i know the crowd is dense but don't be tense
your song is immense n look! they have crossed the fence.
they are hugging u, they are kissing u
not kicking or hissing ya.
just leave them there n run up that stair.
n go to your friend who is kinda bend
n know what , he is wet with sweat
cuz man..............
YOU HAVE WON THE BET.

the best
My Own Rap Songs

The best is always never to less it has never come to a point where we just rest I was always the best then me and my friends always had fights once or twice I was the king of the hole damn crice so just give up and start at the bed of the tice and never to late to make a reck of hate it has always made us wait but then I had a chance to be the king of the ring again it was twicer the a champ of a king of the dang bang of a shang that had beats and names so don't you wish you were me just the best so back off and rest part 2 is coming september 16 of 08 its gonna be the best ha ha rate it

-reply by brandon

who im i
My Own Rap Songs

I am the grime scene saver Rudolf raver chicken eater t-high streeters glaze more jumper Adidas sneaker prada wearer lyrical mc terror straight out the 90s error came out the clorin now I sea clearer open my eyes sea everything is lighter like dragon ball z and street fighter I'm nearer.I aint no hustle and no juny mother****er I am a crime starter I raise peoples bus fair if you wanna no who I am I'm your worst nightmear.

-reply by jama

mysterious, erotic, shaking