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 Feb 6 2008, 11:26 PM
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Privileged Member  Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584  |
Well here is a song I wrote... I'm not sure if its finished yet... I'll decide later....
Its basically about someone struggling with something, and then they ask Christ for help. As far as if it were to be put to music... its written towards black or death metal.... Well enjoy. No Rest Awake! Awake! I shake you Yet you do not stir Awake from your slumber You corrupted thing! I have shaken you You do not stir Awake, I beg of you! Darkness approaches, my soul trembles My heart is fluttering I lie awake in fear and apprehension sobbing does not cease tears flow from my eyes Will this be the last time? Will this night find rest? I clasp my hands, uttering desperate prayers Grinding my teeth, my words unsteady this terror will not cease Please Christ will you help me? Will you give me rest? |
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Feb 8 2008, 12:14 AM
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Newbie [Level 1] Group: Members Posts: 15 Joined: 7-February 08 Member No.: 57,529 |
sound good!
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Feb 8 2008, 11:57 AM
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NERVE: Interception Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 581 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Holy Terra Member No.: 41,610 |
maybe avideo of you singing it? Or maybe something like the song's tune?
The Lyrics looks very good and I can tell that you probably spent a lot of time on it, Good Work! 
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Feb 8 2008, 03:19 PM
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Privileged Member Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584 |
Thanks for your comments... unfortunately... I don't really have a video camera or anything... which stinks...
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