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Nani Cheri
post Aug 23 2006, 06:21 PM
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Hi! I have made a new website... Its still in Dutch, and I have hosted it thru geocities temporary, because fisrt I have to upgrade my credits...and err well, that can take a while LOL tongue.gif But ehh let me know what you think, ofcourse you wouldnt understand the content of it, but maybe some feedback about the template I made with fireworks, flash and dreamweaver?

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Bkag
post Aug 23 2006, 06:30 PM
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Excluding the hosting (it took a long time to load) and the content aside (i dont understand dutch) i would give it a high 8

What could be improved

The blue bar to the right in my opinion should be extended down to the bottom of the page

The title welcome to easy euros is in white on the blue background is quite difficult to see, mabe change it to gray

Last thing is i realy like those flash animations in the title bar but i did not immediately notice them, i would make them a bit bolder. What did you make them with?
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Nani Cheri
post Aug 23 2006, 06:41 PM
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Thanks for you feedback, I noticd that too that it loaded slow, but I thought that was just my internet... I hope it will get better if I put it under trap17 hosting, or do you think that would not matter? As for the bar on the left, I will do that, that could look better thanks. The blocks I made with Flash, but I actually made them light intentional, because I didnt want that to be very striking.

And I will take a look at the welcome part
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post Aug 23 2006, 06:46 PM
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It will load faster with trap17 geocities is always slow especialy since your site is using flash.
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post Aug 23 2006, 07:28 PM
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Looks pretty good. It'll look nicer without the Yahoo ads. I would change the title though that shows up in the title bar because right now it says website2.gif The design is sort of plain but nice with the flash so I wouldn't change it. Pretty nice over all I like it.
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post Aug 23 2006, 10:31 PM
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Your site looks great unfortunetly I cannot read Dutch. So I really do not know what it is about but the layout it awsome! So keep it up and put a translation on it! laugh.gif
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post Aug 24 2006, 07:06 PM
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Your site's Template is cool cool.gif
But again language barrier every word in the site was alien to me, whenever you make the english version dont forget to give the update here.
You have still not implemented the suggestion mentioned above.
What are you doing mad.gif , come on, be quick. biggrin.gif
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post Aug 24 2006, 08:10 PM
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There were no loading problems for me. I like the template and basically everything about it! If your having a hard time translating just use the google web translator.
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post Aug 26 2006, 03:35 PM
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yes as panzer said you can use a web page translator i used Babelfish as i personally think its a better translator. Anaway

1. what is the site about as at the moment it looks like some training website?

2. it would look good with different text and colours

3. there is a bit to much white space

4. its a bit to plain

but appart from that well done i really like the flash and the use of colour so keep up the good work.