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Jun 7 2006, 08:22 AM
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Member [Level 2] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 75 Joined: 15-April 06 Member No.: 21,894 |
I was trying out a new style i made this for SOTW i din use any tuts just used a few c4ds and 2 different renders Pls Rate And Comment |
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Jun 7 2006, 12:34 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 630 Joined: 12-August 05 From: Melbourne, Australia Member No.: 10,624 |
Hmm... it's very hard to make out what the renders are and the text is very difficult to read. It think I've seen a lot better from you, but it could be I don't like the style. 4/10 from me
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Jun 7 2006, 03:45 PM
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Never alone with Christ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 647 Joined: 22-July 05 Member No.: 9,713 |
It looks great, except I can't see the render very well, and the color isn't well balanced. You need a little moderation in the colors, you know, contrast. The red is too much, if the render is red, maybe a diferent color in the background would work well. But it is a clean sig, and you don't find many of those anymore, and for me, that is the key. I would rate it as follow:
Color: 4/10 Cleaness: 10/10 Clarity: 5/10 Overall: 5/10 |
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Jun 7 2006, 04:30 PM
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Member [Level 2] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 75 Joined: 15-April 06 Member No.: 21,894 |
its done this way i took to red renders the background is a gradient red-black and then a red rendered rippled then added a few c4ds added the actual render added lens flare added an other ripple gassian blur and sharpen and thats the outcome and im glad that i found out ways to improve thnx
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Jun 7 2006, 08:17 PM
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Newbie [Level 1] ![]() Group: Members Posts: 11 Joined: 30-May 06 Member No.: 24,543 |
Yes i have to agree, the render and text is hard to make out, in my view the render looks from ziods if i am right. I like the coloring i just think the text and render could be better.
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