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 Jun 28 2005, 04:05 AM
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{([Mod])}  Group: Members Posts: 710 Joined: 30-October 04 From: Texas Member No.: 2,058  |
Okay, I took a couple suggestions from my other one and I tried it on a new one. I know the text still isn't too easy to read, but I tried >.< Please rate and give constructive critisicm!
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Jun 28 2005, 05:17 AM
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[::Boy Wonder::] Group: Members Posts: 2,098 Joined: 5-April 05 From: Costa Mesa, CA Member No.: 5,294  |
Better. Try using colors a little closer to the render (you don't have to have the same EXACT color though) and adding a few layer effects to the text (shadow, stroke). You did good though. The brushing's not bad, the render's pretty good, the text isn't too bad. You even did a 3px border, which, believe me, is something people around here need.
 Great job. Keep it up. |
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Jun 28 2005, 05:40 AM
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{([Mod])} Group: Members Posts: 710 Joined: 30-October 04 From: Texas Member No.: 2,058 |
Okay, using your suggestions I came up with this:
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Jun 28 2005, 05:49 AM
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$p4m 0n j00 $h4m3 m3 0nc3 $p4m 0n m3 $h4m3 m3 7\/\/1c3 Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 6,444 Joined: 21-September 04 From: 9r33|\| 399$ 4|\|D 5P4/\/\ Member No.: 1,218 |
johnny you hurt my feelings again
 what johnny said you did but you go to work on the font change the color to something lighter. but the brushing just got better too keep up the good and soon you will be as good as me ***EVIL LAUGH***
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Jun 28 2005, 06:36 AM
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Premium Member Group: Members Posts: 198 Joined: 15-May 05 From: SoCal Member No.: 7,099 |
And both of you will soon be good as me! lol I'm joking of course...i'm not that great either.
Anyways, this is a big improvement. Brushing's decent, and you have a border [yay!]. The second one is much, much, much better then the first one. All that needs to be worked on is the font and blending the render into the background |
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Jun 28 2005, 06:53 AM
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[::Boy Wonder::] Group: Members Posts: 2,098 Joined: 5-April 05 From: Costa Mesa, CA Member No.: 5,294 |
QUOTE(Phyre @ Jun 27 2005, 11:36 PM) And both of you will soon be good as me! lol I'm joking of course...i'm not that great either. Anyways, this is a big improvement. Brushing's decent, and you have a border [yay!]. The second one is much, much, much better then the first one. All that needs to be worked on is the font and blending the render into the background  [agree] And how did I hurt your feelings SM? O.o |
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Jun 28 2005, 03:40 PM
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Princess Group: Members Posts: 1,233 Joined: 9-October 04 From: England Member No.: 1,563 |
woo Chris.. I can clearly see that you are getting tons better
 lmao remember the button you made... (not making fun of you or anything) lol!!Its looking like some of the other member's stuff... which is good. |
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Jun 28 2005, 04:02 PM
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[::Boy Wonder::] Group: Members Posts: 2,098 Joined: 5-April 05 From: Costa Mesa, CA Member No.: 5,294 |
QUOTE(Becca @ Jun 28 2005, 08:40 AM) woo Chris.. I can clearly see that you are getting tons better lmao remember the button you made... (not making fun of you or anything) lol!!Its looking like some of the other member's stuff... which is good. Hey there Becca. Nice to see you around my part of the forums. ^-^ BTW, just to let you know, your site's down? O.o |
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Jun 28 2005, 05:09 PM
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Super Member Group: Members Posts: 209 Joined: 9-October 04 Member No.: 1,574 |
QUOTE(Johnny @ Jun 28 2005, 04:02 PM) Hey there Becca. Nice to see you around my part of the forums. ^-^ your part of the forums eh... anyways, the colors on your second attempt are much better than the first. for the font, i suggest looking for some new fonts. just work on trying some different things with the text. |