My friend Silvio is making some music and he needs some feedback about his work. Here is what he has to say about it:



Here r the links:

Eastern trip.mp3 (8 Mb)
In My Heart.mp3 (5 Mb)

well i cant download then, so check your host

gec100,

In My Heart.mp3 (5 Mb), to receive and hear, it was not possible.
Eastern trip.mp3 (8 Mb).

Freelancer, Eastern Sunrise, monotonously, also it is overloaded, effects.
But for the beginner, very much it is not bad.
So it seems to me.

Apologize.

Can't also downlaod :?

i've fixed in my heart link.

sry :oops:

thx very much 4 trying

I'm no music critic,but I liked both of them. Just one thing I felt could be changed- In My Heart In the beginning of the song it seemed like it took forever to get to the music. Other than that I thought they were good

How it to me is good very good even I greet

I abolutely agree about "In My Heart." I was frankly bored until the drumbeat came along. The cut could be cut down by a whole minute.

Eastern Trip:

The "me-meow-me-meow" sample is VERY annoying and should be used sparingly. Its there for the majority of the song and it makes the whole thing feel very monotonous (boring) so that should be changed. And the end after the bridge section should be more huge! piano's going up and down octaves and things then when it comes in with that indian sounding music you should keep it all going except for that guitar down the bottom of the mix somewhere because that gets annoying after so long. Or it could be changed to something different, to make it a more larger sound for the last bit. And then finally the ending, which was great, but the chanting was kinda ruining it at the end there. Keep the banging on the drums but take away the chanting if you can. And the piano should get slower and sloppier, like missing notes when everything else is going away. and that final chord was good but it might be unneccesary when the piano moves differently at the end...

In My Heart:

take away the "I love you" sample which is WAY overused... just take it out completely from the whole song, have it not there at all, ever, ever, and you've got yourself a hit. The rest of the song was great. Only suggestion is maybe change the bass riff occassionally. It got a bit boring from just about before the guitar came in and it stayed the same during the guitar, when it really should have been doing something interesting to accomodate the guitar...

And other people got bored by the intro of In My Heart but they are stupid, its the best bit of the song but it is RUINED by the "I love you" being repeated, its so ANNOYING.

:shock: :shock: Thats my opinion 8)

thank U all very much 4 your opinions (of course more opinions is more then appreciated ). I will forward all of your posts to Silvio.