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Jan 25 2006, 09:52 AM
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Super Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 258 Joined: 13-November 05 Member No.: 14,234 |
Could you guys take a few minutes , and check my website and give me your valuable advices which would definately very important to improve my site.
http://pakdir.com and if some one would like to exchange the link with me , please let me know. thanks and Have a good day. |
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Jan 25 2006, 10:20 AM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 503 Joined: 22-September 04 From: Worcester/Milton Keynes (UK) Member No.: 1,226 myCENT:ZERO |
well, i like it
you have a lot of content which is always a good thing so no problems there. Layout But something it seems to lack is navagation at the side or top of the site on every page (yes you do have a few links at top, but not overly useful). Maybe decide the msot important areas of your site and create navagation for them? Secondly i like the large spacing between things, makes the site feel roomy lol, but the Quote of the day box could be padded down abit away from the header bar, as it looks odd And the website logo/graphic should be in the header, or above it possibly if u wnated, as not a huge amout of attention is beign drawn to it. Graphics + Style: Very simple, but effective. Could be improved possibly with some title bar graphics for each section, and possibly colour coding your site accordingly. . . i.e blue=culture, green=attractions, grey=news. . etc because at the moment its quite a miss-match of differernt colours. Keep the header's blue colour, its a good stylish choice. Also conside creating a background for the main tables of the website, to separate it from the background of the the body. also possibly use a differernt logo and graphics for your header graphic. If you want help i could knock a few ideas up and if ya like them i would create all the neccery text you needed. overall, nice heavy content website you can use my crits, or dispand them, in the end of the day its only my opinion and i'm sure someone will dissagree with me. keep at it. |
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Jan 25 2006, 10:23 AM
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Super Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 492 Joined: 15-March 05 Member No.: 4,538 |
Hello, well i like your page because it is simple! But there are a few things I'd change or improve..
- the logo is clearly a bit muddled so you should work on that to make it clear if it is possible (never lower your jpg or gif quality to such a visible rate) - i think there are too many colors (that blue you have on the top is nice...but than you have yellow, green, pink, white, grey,..just too many..i think that a website looks best if you use 3 colors @ most..) - the last thing i'd point out is positioning of these cells (modules)...it is a bit disorganized so maybe you could make a 3 collumn table and put news in the middle and those extra stuff on the left and right of it..i think it would look better.. all in all it is a nice page and if you are goin to change it, keep in mind that it has to stay simple as it is now! hope it helps..greetz & good luck with your site! |
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Jan 25 2006, 10:40 AM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 503 Joined: 22-September 04 From: Worcester/Milton Keynes (UK) Member No.: 1,226 myCENT:ZERO |
well, i was bored so i went ahead and did a quick idea:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v175/Goo...kdirconcept.gif it's not perfect. Just a quick 5 min edit. |
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Jan 25 2006, 02:16 PM
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Member [Level 1] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 68 Joined: 22-January 06 From: Latvia, Ogre Member No.: 17,468 |
at all page looks OK. But some troubles are there.. Like a - just 3 navigations on top. Try adding some more. logo in left side if god-awful:0 sorry:)! There isn`t enaught content for page. page is too coloured and too plain at once. Try sth. with colour and text. But at all nice page.
7.8/10 |
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Jan 25 2006, 03:11 PM
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Super Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 302 Joined: 17-June 05 From: Frankfurt, Germany Member No.: 8,358 |
hm i think its a great site for people form pakistan. but your layout really needs some working on. take a look at the thing goosestaf did for you to think about how you can work a bit with it. put some more color into it. and play around with some fonts and sizes for your sections. but have a similar colorsyle for each section. or you have have maybe lets say a diffrent color for one collum of items. ie. the left bigger one and one collum for the right one which is smaller. i mean like one style for "News from Pakistan" and all the things under is. and then one for "Quote of the Day" and all the things under that one.
also try to work with gradients maybe. gradients always look nice. |
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Jan 25 2006, 03:58 PM
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Member [Level 1] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 67 Joined: 24-January 06 Member No.: 17,569 |
hey I checked out your site & in my opinon the concept of it seems really good but the layout of information is a little too confusing for me.
here are some recommendations: 1) use the same backgroung color for the content headings ,use the same bule color for the QUOTE news from pakastian & QUOTE pakastian directory heading background color2)The content backgrounds should have colors that dont differ too much from each other....i recommend using just the White, grey and light bule..the purple and brown colors dont blend well in the white background of the page 3) a similar header like what yahoo uses will look perfect on the site( icons as menu items and your logo in the middle) 4) organize your layout of content a little better......i recommend using Yahoo home page as an example on how your site layout shoud look in regards to placing and organizing its content......... hope this helps you........... |
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Jan 25 2006, 04:48 PM
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Trap Grand Marshal Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 1,140 Joined: 19-May 05 From: Mexico Member No.: 7,234 |
Its Ok, but I think it sort of looks flat, try adding graphics to content headers, and a background and definetely a header for the whole page.
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Feb 9 2006, 09:45 PM
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Newbie [Level 2] ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 33 Joined: 9-February 06 Member No.: 18,457 |
Ad more picture make it look more lively
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