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May 3 2008, 05:24 PM
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OK, here are some of the poems I have made up for my own entertainment, so I decided to post them for everyone else, please rate my poems from 1-10, and tell me if there is anything I should work on. ^^ I like writing poems. Especially limericks, concrete, and free verses. And please keep in mind this is my first post.
Limericks: THE YELLOW MEADOW I hopped in the meadow and onto a tree, Something yellow i see, what a wonderful surprise I've seen, I think my sight was a little too keen, that sun was a little too mellow for me. A LITTLE LOVE With a little love, You can fly on that dove, But don't try it, and I'm not calling you a siss, Flying would be teaching yourself to throw yourself at the ground and miss, Hope you won't see what's above. ^That was random, i need rhymes, LOL.^ Concrete: Thinking of one. =P |
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May 8 2008, 12:20 AM
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Meaning of life
My Made Up Poems. How you live Is how you Die The smiles you give Until you cry All you touch And all you see Is all your life will ever be -reply by Daniel Llamas |
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