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demongaara
post Apr 15 2005, 04:32 AM
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a dripping solution to solve ones pain
a notion to continue on
what lies on the surface succombs you
trickling down your spine
creating chills of confusion
dancing in your mind
destroying the grounds of your soul
seeping into your body
engulfing life
freeing all
you are my drug
my escape

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wassie
post Apr 15 2005, 10:01 AM
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nice poem smile.gif
little strange you say it is "destroying the grounds of your soul"
and still is your escape... but nice smile.gif

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post Apr 15 2005, 10:44 AM
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yeah,pretty poem you gave.especially i like the clear title of the poem,which describ the feeling enough.

i think the poem should have a last version to make,expect...

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