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 Nov 30 2006, 10:32 AM
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Newbie [Level 1]  Group: Members Posts: 23 Joined: 29-September 06 Member No.: 30,759  |
Hidden Feelings
© By Brock W Johnson AKA The69_er There's a girl Who is secretly In love, her secret Being she can't tell Anyone Why? They'd all laugh And be shocked. The Boy well he'd never Give her a second look She's all confused and All mixed up. Why does She feel this way? All she knows is when She's with him, she's free. Free to be who she is And to be happy. She just wants to be With him, to be able to Tell him how she feels For him to feel the way She does But she'll never be able To express her love, she'll Shelter it in her heart for Always I've loved him for so long... |
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Nov 30 2006, 05:54 PM
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A clever man learns from his own mistakes, a WISE man learns from those of OTHERS Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 979 Joined: 12-April 06 From: Essex, UK Member No.: 21,719 |
aw i like it, it gets across the emotions very well and i can kind of relate to it and imagine myself in this situation (even though Im not) which makes it more effective, at least to me.
If you are in the situation then you might want to think about letting him know. People wont laugh and you only need to tell him, not the world. Everyone feels love and believe me you will so regret it if you don't tell him. But back on topic its a nice piece of work 
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Dec 1 2006, 12:29 AM
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Newbie [Level 1] Group: Members Posts: 23 Joined: 29-September 06 Member No.: 30,759 |
No offience im a male i just like wrighting poems lol so im not in this situation
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Dec 1 2006, 02:55 PM
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A clever man learns from his own mistakes, a WISE man learns from those of OTHERS Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 979 Joined: 12-April 06 From: Essex, UK Member No.: 21,719 |
QUOTE(The69_er @ Dec 1 2006, 12:29 AM)  No offience im a male i just like wrighting poems lol so im not in this situation ahh fair enough! Apologies for assumptions! |
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Dec 1 2006, 04:35 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 104 Joined: 8-September 06 From: London Member No.: 29,637 |
QUOTE If you are in the situation then you might want to think about letting him know. People wont laugh and you only need to tell him, not the world. Everyone feels love and believe me you will so regret it if you don't tell him No!!! Are you joking? A girl should NEVER tell the guy that she llikes him unless she wants to make a total fool of herself. It is all up to the guy to make the first move...otherwise he does not like her at all. |
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Dec 2 2006, 12:16 PM
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Newbie [Level 1] Group: Members Posts: 23 Joined: 29-September 06 Member No.: 30,759 |
QUOTE(sweet_princess @ Dec 2 2006, 03:35 AM) No!!! Are you joking? A girl should NEVER tell the guy that she llikes him unless she wants to make a total fool of herself. It is all up to the guy to make the first move...otherwise he does not like her at all. Mabey but some times the guy is shy and does not know what to say so it really depends on the situation. |
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 Dec 13 2006, 03:54 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 0 Joined: 16-November 06 From: USA Member No.: 33,514 |
Wow, that was heart touching. Anyone who reads that could feel the emotions. I wish she can tell her love how she feels, and that he loves her back. How deep. Really, a good write.
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Oct 7 2007, 05:15 AM
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Trap Double Mocha Member Group: Members Posts: 2,360 Joined: 21-September 07 Member No.: 50,369 |
~*~little miss kels~*~
WOW!! this is really good!! I think everyone has felt this way one time or another! the guy always makes the first move I don't think its right for the girl too!! |
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