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agentblade
post Apr 25 2006, 07:48 PM
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Hey hey.. I'm made a personal homepage using flash, my first attempt at one. Do let me know what you think of it and how I can improve on it. thanks

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Tyssen
post Apr 25 2006, 10:38 PM
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Maybe make the arrows for navigating through the pictures a bit lighter because they're hard to spot at first glance.
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dark_drgn
post Apr 26 2006, 03:43 AM
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Nice flash animation though i would prefer a stationary tag with links on the top.
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rvalkass
post Apr 26 2006, 05:23 AM
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It looks great, I've never seen any sort of navigaition like that. Just keep the blogs updated and you will have an excellent site.
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post Apr 26 2006, 05:27 AM
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Try centering everything on your site. It looks more professional that way. Also, remove that border around the flash content, similar to the one "Walking with Jesus".. If possible, place the ads below the "Walking with Jesus" flash animation or place it right at the bottom of your page. It doesn't look good on top of your site.

Anyway, nice flash site.
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agentblade
post Apr 26 2006, 07:12 AM
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Thanks for all your replies guys.. I'll certainly make modifications to them..

about the ad, i'm not sure how I can shift the position of the ads. But i'm hoping to shift my site to trap17.com.. hopefully there won't be this ad problem..

I saw this menu from somewhere before and I sort of copied it. hehe..
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post Apr 26 2006, 07:50 AM
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Well..I really like your site, it is great! The thing is that it is so happy and live with all the shiny colors and stuff - i think that it is perfect for what it serves for - a few pictures and blogs of a couple! I doesn't need to look too professional, because that would ruin this cosy feeling one gets when one enters your site...

Just keep up the good work and don't fix too much wink.gif

greetz
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agentblade
post Apr 26 2006, 02:00 PM
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cool.. thanks man.. those are really encouraging words..

keep telling myself to keep it simple, keep it simple.. haha..
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Nani Cheri
post Apr 26 2006, 03:43 PM
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Your site is beautiful. I like your style. Really unique. Are you sure its your first attempt at making a flash site? It looks quiet professional too me. I made a flash site too, but yours looks much more professional then mine. Well done! Keep it going.
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