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 Mar 31 2005, 04:02 PM
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.::UniCorN::.  Group: Members Posts: 973 Joined: 19-September 04 From: Dalian CHN Member No.: 1,192  |
hey to everyone wizad yas here.i achieve my new homepage and uploaded just now.please look at it.i hope to get some feedback from you.thx
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Mar 31 2005, 05:47 PM
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Member [Level 3] Group: Members Posts: 93 Joined: 25-March 05 From: England/Cambridgeshire Member No.: 4,899 |
I don't know what your site is meant to be about but it's in Japenese. And why do you have a t-shirt on the homepage.
 Something else which would be good is to put the <title> cose into your homepage so you have a title for the page. 
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Mar 31 2005, 05:57 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 139 Joined: 25-February 05 From: England Member No.: 3,991 |
Kind of scary to tell you the truth, add a little more content in though and I'm sure that some japanese people may find it very entertaining. Or is it Chinese? Or Korean? Like the silver on the edges.
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Mar 31 2005, 09:24 PM
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Super Member Group: Members Posts: 463 Joined: 8-November 04 Member No.: 2,186 |
I gather that the site isn't finished, not sure if your featuring the t-shirt or selling it......but you should have said it wasn't in english.....
You should put news above the news scroll because for the rest of us, it just looks like a bunch of ????? and the time.... round |
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Mar 31 2005, 09:51 PM
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Member [Level 1] Group: Members Posts: 63 Joined: 19-March 05 Member No.: 4,726 |
The T-shirt is kinda of strange to me, but maybe it has to do with the contents of the website? further, I like the graphics on the main page. Very nicely done. But I found it hard to find the links to clik on.
Hope you can do something with these comments. |
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Apr 1 2005, 12:09 AM
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Privileged Member Group: Members Posts: 661 Joined: 10-January 05 Member No.: 3,189 |
QUOTE(JJBDude @ Mar 31 2005, 10:47 AM) I don't know what your site is meant to be about but it's in Japenese.  That's chinese. anyways, your site looks ok, but needs a lot of revamping, you should take out the "hulunes allrights reserved" text, and obviously add more content/ |
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Apr 1 2005, 12:44 AM
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.::UniCorN::. Group: Members Posts: 973 Joined: 19-September 04 From: Dalian CHN Member No.: 1,192 |
thx all
i will complete my page late out of school time.by adding some content to rich the page,the page would looks nice.maybe chinese charactors make you confuse.in the middle of T-shirt which i designed for my interes exists two links.have you click it to visit the next page?maybe not...however i should try my best to perfect the page on looks.
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Apr 1 2005, 01:34 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 143 Joined: 29-March 05 From: Ontario, Canada Member No.: 4,983 |
I like the t-shirt idea, its very original (I've never seen anything like this before). I also like what you did with Flash on your main page. Are you a graphics designer? you did a very good job.
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Apr 1 2005, 01:36 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Members Posts: 143 Joined: 29-March 05 From: Ontario, Canada Member No.: 4,983 |
Another thing I forgot to mention is, alot of your graphics seems pixlated, I dont know if that's what you intended to present, but they dont look very smooth.
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