 My Greenhole Website, My new web site about Car Insurances |
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 Feb 10 2006, 02:48 PM
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Newbie [Level 2]  Group: Members Posts: 38 Joined: 18-January 06 Member No.: 17,329  |
Hi, I'm Sheila... and I have been trying to get my website about car insurance going. It's my only source of income .. so I need help making sure it looks good and all the links work. Also, if you have any ideas on what I can put on the website to make it look better or more appealing, please let me know. The only way I even make money on this thing is because of the ad links, but of course they would need to be clicked. But anyway, any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for listening XOXOXO Sheila
Here is my website --> http://www.greenhole.com/carinsurance This post has been edited by joeysicily: Mar 8 2006, 04:59 PM |
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Feb 11 2006, 12:44 PM
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Newbie [Level 2] Group: Members Posts: 29 Joined: 6-February 06 Member No.: 18,272 |
I was on your website, it looks nice,but..There is always a but
 I think, if you want to make your website look better and more appealing, try to use some colour, some nice background maybe, nothing heavy to eyes, sky blue, nice green or something like that... You can think about some logo maybe, that people could remember your website, so use some imagination and creativity to make a nice logo for your website. Your navigation bar is a little confusing, but also it is very simple...maybe you can ad some buttons, for 'Home', 'Donate me', etc. For a start it is not bad, but I think you can do it better, you just need some imagination, news from insurance, some pictures and you will see it will already look nicer... This are just my advices...I hope I helped you a little...
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Feb 12 2006, 06:32 AM
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Newbie [Level 2] Group: Members Posts: 38 Joined: 18-January 06 Member No.: 17,329 |
QUOTE(Sorrow @ Feb 11 2006, 07:44 AM)  I was on your website, it looks nice,but..There is always a but I think, if you want to make your website look better and more appealing, try to use some colour, some nice background maybe, nothing heavy to eyes, sky blue, nice green or something like that... You can think about some logo maybe, that people could remember your website, so use some imagination and creativity to make a nice logo for your website. Your navigation bar is a little confusing, but also it is very simple...maybe you can ad some buttons, for 'Home', 'Donate me', etc. For a start it is not bad, but I think you can do it better, you just need some imagination, news from insurance, some pictures and you will see it will already look nicer... This are just my advices...I hope I helped you a little... Hey Sorrow, Wow thanks for that great analysis for my page. I didn't think anyone was going to take any time of their busy life to just look at my page and EVEN comment. Thanks soo much. Are you a webmater or do web designing yourself? Is their a website you have designed? I would love to take a look at it. too and see what you see. Well talk to you later |
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Feb 16 2006, 06:44 AM
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Super Member Group: Members Posts: 258 Joined: 13-November 05 Member No.: 14,234 |
Hey...
I was just wondering if you could add the names of the companies also ? I mean, well, you have given the names of the cheapest ---- companies of each state , isnt it possible that you also add links to them also , so that whenever people click on the link they can go to that company website directly ? it will be more helpful. well...atleast i think so.. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:30 PM
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Trap Grand Marshal Member Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 1,137 Joined: 19-May 05 From: Mexico Member No.: 7,234 |
What about insurance in Mexico? hehe... J/k. I think your website needs an interface, as it is right now it is just data but I think you could present it better. If you dont know how to make an Interface there is a lot of tutorials on the web, and some are so easy that you can do it yourself without any experience needed. For the tutorials I recommend the following site:
Pixel2Life I hope this helps you and Good Luck!!! |
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Feb 16 2006, 10:24 PM
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Trap Double Mocha Member Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 2,228 Joined: 5-November 05 From: That one place over there... Member No.: 13,830 |
Like the others said I woul improve the design a bit and add more color. Try and make it look a bit more professional. A list of all insurance companies being compared would probably be a good addition. When you make the list I would also have the link to that insurance company's website, maybe even put an average price so people know what they are looking for.
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Feb 28 2006, 05:20 PM
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Newbie [Level 2] Group: Members Posts: 38 Joined: 18-January 06 Member No.: 17,329 |
Hey guys,
I just finished creating a new website. It is http://www.mygreenhole.com/carinsurance/ and no it is not porn. It is a car insurance website. I need feed back on how the pages look and what I could do to improve the look and feel of it. Also, I have added google ads to the pages. Please check to see if that put in a good place or should be moved around and hopefully those links work. Again the website is http://www.mygreenhole.com/carinsurance/ [No its not porn] Thanks so much This post has been edited by joeysicily: Feb 28 2006, 05:23 PM |
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Feb 28 2006, 05:42 PM
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Ancient Enigma  Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 1,786 Joined: 11-July 04 From: under the stars Member No.: 76 |
nothing spectacular about it, to be honest. as if it's made in a rush, and bears no professional design input before it was created. what's the picture of a girl got to do with car insurance, i was thinking. maybe to lure visitors by seduction? and animated gifts are so amateurish. and information is lacking on the car insurance companies listed for each state, not even an email or website link.
by the looks of it, it's just among the hundred thousands (even millions) of websites designed to capitalize on the adsense program, nothing special. but there's nothing wrong with that. just bear in mind adsense terms of service with regards to the use of top-paying keywords (like mesothelioma and car insurance) simply for the sake of high-value clicks. 
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Feb 28 2006, 06:30 PM
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Incest is a game the whole family can play. Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 1,227 Joined: 11-February 05 From: Heaven Member No.: 3,709 |
It looks basic.
What's the picture of the girl for? If it's you, then it shouldn't be the first thing you see on the page. It's the kind of thing you'd expect to see in an About the Author section and even then it'd be a 50x100 thumbnail. When you click on your state and receive the name of the car insurance company, it would be nice if you posted links to the sites of the people who provide the car insurance. How about a profile: name, age of company.... With a nice and well-thought out colour scheme, a few pictures (I mean a header image on each page and stuff like that) and a good css sheet, you could make the website look more professional. That's what'll bring in more visitors. One of things people assocaite with badly-done webpages is a badly-done service. 6/10 edit: If the name of your site is commonly confused with porn, perhaps you should consider a rename. People confusing your site for porn won't help traffic. |
