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Nov 18 2007, 05:48 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584 |
So after two all nighters I have finally got my website done. I am dead tired.... and I imagine some of my pages are poorly written for that very reason, but at least I'm finally done!!
For those of you that want to see the finished product: http://2kart.trap17.com I would also appreciate it if you joined my forum as well, no members yet........ thanks... I would just like to say: Trap17, I could never have made this with out you... because I'm cheap and I wouldn't buy paid hosting! |
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Nov 25 2007, 11:32 AM
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Premium Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 195 Joined: 7-June 07 From: India Member No.: 44,356 |
hi, just now i went through ur site and saw. It is good for a beginner, please try changing the layouts, the *bottom* colour background ans the black colour font dosent seem to go hand in hand. Check it out.
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Nov 25 2007, 04:29 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 525 Joined: 13-October 06 From: Alberta, Canada Member No.: 31,584 |
thanks for the comments. I might see what other color will work... I'm not of what will work though...... any suggestions?
Also, there is now an image gallery that you can post your own art at http://gallery.2kart.trap17.com |
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Nov 25 2007, 08:15 PM
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Newbie [Level 1] ![]() Group: Members Posts: 15 Joined: 24-November 07 Member No.: 53,658 |
I quite like the website overall. It has a nice simple layout and the colours work ok. One thing I would work on is some sort of container which contains all the site, with nice curved edges and all. Then you could build the logo into the layout. The logo is a bit too simple in my opinion, so I suggest doing something with the text. You could even try validating it with W3 and improving the coding with that. I noticed in the code that there is no doc type. It isn't needed, but it's good practice in my opinion to put one in. Also, on the contact us page - maybe build a contact us php form. This will stop people spamming your email.
Using the PHP code: CODE mail(); It is pretty simple. |
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Nov 25 2007, 08:24 PM
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Privileged Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 628 Joined: 20-May 06 Member No.: 23,968 |
Your design does not contrast well enough. I had a difficult time reading because you used very similar colours for the text and background. Try white as a color for the text. I also suggest changing the layout to a div based one instead of a table based one. Then Jim's your uncle.
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Nov 26 2007, 06:53 AM
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apt-get moo ![]() Group: [MODERATOR] Posts: 2,056 Joined: 28-May 05 From: Hertfordshire, England Member No.: 7,593 ![]() |
I have to agree with Tetraca - the colours you have picked do not have enough contrast to make the site easy to read. Change the colours to ones that contrast against eachother more.
Also, on the Portfolio page, I noticed that all of the 'thumbnails' are in fact loading the full sized image. You'll need to make copies of your images at smaller sizes and use them for the thumbnails, otherwise they appear to take ages to load. On the programming page, see if you can get a Javascript or PHP script that will do syntax highlighting for you. It looks great and makes the code so much easier to read if it is syntax highlighted. Finally, on the contact page, try putting a contact form on their rather than your email address. It will avoid you getting spam in your inbox (as spiders won't be able to see your address) and your users won't need to fire up their email program to contact you. |
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Nov 26 2007, 07:13 AM
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NERVE: Interception ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 530 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Holy Terra Member No.: 41,610 |
remember a site is never completely finished, those that are 100% complete are dead. Remember to update it often. I agree with the people above, the text isn't light enough, I would recommend using a lighter shade as it is a bit hard to read at the moment. Also validate it in W3 it'll improve the code and make itt more compatible with other browsers. Also consider putting in a DOCTYPE tag, it doesn't do much but in my opinion it really shows what language you are writing in (HTML is split into Strict and Transitional and has many different versions). You might want to consider making a decent navigation bar, the one at the moment might be missed by a few people...
I liked the site overall althrough the design seems to be a little familiar (not saying you used a template or anything) but the design just looks familiar. |
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Nov 26 2007, 08:24 AM
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Yeah the grey needs to go unless you do some gradients and try for a vista glass look, or go for some more color. The layout is very basic but thats where a version to comes into play in which I would recommend some of these sites to get some tips and idea's on what your next website could be like.
http://www.alvit.de/handbook/ http://www.oswd.org/ http://www,pixel2life.com Also since your going for a portfolio look I would suggest using the lightbox script to give some web 2.0 look to it, as It is very easy to set up and run on your site. Also look into some php to add a bit of interactivity, such as adding a comments section to your graphics and tutorials and such. |
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Nov 26 2007, 12:33 PM
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Member [Level 2] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: [HOSTED] Posts: 80 Joined: 18-October 07 Member No.: 51,724 |
Way to go, pal! But the text color is almost the same as the background color, which makes it a little harsh for my eye. Please consider this issue
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