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Mar 24 2007, 06:51 PM
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Newbie [Level 1] ![]() Group: Members Posts: 12 Joined: 24-March 07 Member No.: 40,577 |
FATE , TIME or DESTINY?
This is something i created a year back and posted it on my blog here it goes QUOTE What was the start of all this? When did the cogs of fate begin to turn? Perhaps it is impossible to grasp that answer now, From deep within the flow of time...But, for a certainty, back then, We loved so many, yet hated so much, We hurt others and were hurt ourselves... Yet even then we ran like the wind Whilst our laughter echoed, Under cerulean skies... I have been waiting an eternity... just for this very moment... Meaninglessly hurting one another... The disappearing life-forms... The words that become deleted... The thoughts that become buried... The pool of cells that slowly evaporate... The echoes of consciousness that slowly fade... Love to hate... Hate to love... Why are we born? Why do we die? Evolution? The ``survival of the fittest?'' What is there to be achieved from harming one another... killing one another... The ``eggs'' that we call planets... And the innumerable ``spermatozoa'' which gather around these that we call life-forms... When one of these countless seeds inseminates a planet, a new universe is born. But until that occurs, hundreds of millions of years will pass, and innumerable life-forms will be born, then die... That is the be-all and end-all. Everything exists for that one moment. All so that the universe can evolve into the next dimension... Does that make us all just pawns? Are each of our short lives nothing but a cheap sacrifice just so the one chosen life-form can be born? No. That is not the case! Each and every one of us has a chance of becoming that one chosen life-form which inseminates a planet. Yes, it could be ``you''... Genes and environment... Each of us tries to do his best under the limited conditions we are each dealt. Each life-form that attempts to eke out a decent life for itself forms a link in the golden chain that leads to the creation of a new universe. If one link is missing, there will be no future. There is no such thing as a useless life-form... No such thing as a pawn! Every single thing in the whole of nature is perhaps just dreaming a dream of ``life''... All of them are also perhaps nothing more than a dream dreamt by the planet before it is born. Oh, but yes... Eventually all dreams will return to Zurvan... to the sea of dreams... ...................................................... ...................................................... Wanderer...! Don't go yet, Wandrer...!!! It's alright. Everything is alright now. Time, which has been divided, will be unified again now. The time for farewells has come... You will lose all memory of this whole adventure and return to your own time. But this time, you will be able to live your own life! We alone do not have the power to heal the world's woes, or to solve all its mysteries. And yet, even then... It was bloody good knowing ya, mate! Thanks for being born``you,'' Wanderer! I guess now's the time to say, ``see ya later, mate!'' But... I'll find ya... Somewhere, somewhere... I'm bloody sure of it! No matter the time period, no matter the world ya live in, I'll find ya! I'm sure... I'm sure I will find ya... |
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Mar 24 2007, 06:53 PM
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Advanced Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 104 Joined: 8-September 06 From: London Member No.: 29,637 |
Wow...That was really, really good.
I wish I was as good as you! What type of a poem is that called? |
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Mar 25 2007, 05:42 PM
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For just a little bit of feedback, that poem is really good, it really seems that whoever wrote it is really good at it... But for the negative, that poem happens to be from a PSX game called Chrono Cross. If you don't know about it, Google is your friend
So yeah, nice work, but I doubt it's yours. Edit: Link to a few quotes, among them, this very one QUOTE
This post has been edited by Kouji: Mar 25 2007, 05:46 PM |
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